Thoughtful Poems and Prose
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Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a terrific contest entry. Good luck in the contest. I wish you the best.
I wish you the best. I wish you well in the contest. They are fun, win or lose.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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This is a terrific contest entry. Good luck in the contest. I wish you the best.
I wish you the best. I wish you well in the contest. They are fun, win or lose.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thanks for delivering the write stuff.
Comment from rjuselius
this is a hilarious piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the last line, what a humorous punch! excellent my friend.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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this is a hilarious piece of poetry dear anonymous! i love the last line, what a humorous punch! excellent my friend.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
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Thank you, Rebekka.
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Writing Common Sense, has all the syllables in the correct places and uses homonyms and homophones to make thigs as RIGHT as they can be. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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This humorous 5-7-5, Writing Common Sense, has all the syllables in the correct places and uses homonyms and homophones to make thigs as RIGHT as they can be. Nice poem.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very clever, Anonymous Poet.
Way to play both sides of the political aisle, LOL.
This is spot-on in syllable count and message.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Very clever, Anonymous Poet.
Way to play both sides of the political aisle, LOL.
This is spot-on in syllable count and message.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thanks, DK.
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U R welcome.
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha, that is SO bad that it's good! Funny poem manages to deliver a good message through all those puns. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Haha, that is SO bad that it's good! Funny poem manages to deliver a good message through all those puns. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reading this verse.
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You're welcome
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this concise 5-7-5 for the contest. The humor rings thru this creatively structured poem with the use of synonyms and antonyms. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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thank you for sharing this concise 5-7-5 for the contest. The humor rings thru this creatively structured poem with the use of synonyms and antonyms. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reading this verse.
Comment from tfawcus
Very good! As any wheelwright will tell you, what goes around comes around and these new rites are generally just old ones recycled, treadled out again!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Very good! As any wheelwright will tell you, what goes around comes around and these new rites are generally just old ones recycled, treadled out again!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reading this verse, Tony.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a touch of humor. There is a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Your post has good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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This is very well written with a touch of humor. There is a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Your post has good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reading this verse, Charles.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a good poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count: 5-7-5
Great artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Humorous Poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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You've written a good poem.
It consists of three lines with a syllable count: 5-7-5
Great artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Humorous Poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reading this verse.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Ha ha! Good humor poem here that's penned for the 5-7-5. Great contest entry. Its funny and cute. Hard to do in short parameters.
Thanks for sharing and good luck
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Ha ha! Good humor poem here that's penned for the 5-7-5. Great contest entry. Its funny and cute. Hard to do in short parameters.
Thanks for sharing and good luck
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2017
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Thank you for reading this verse.
