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5 total reviews
Comment from Pili Pubul
As always unique ... amazing presentation , spiritual imagery
touching the soul. Can see you are working hard as always.
In the time I was out all my poems are gone forever,,, unfortunately I kept very few do to the fact that I wrote them directly here... big hugs. Pili
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As always unique ... amazing presentation , spiritual imagery
touching the soul. Can see you are working hard as always.
In the time I was out all my poems are gone forever,,, unfortunately I kept very few do to the fact that I wrote them directly here... big hugs. Pili
Comment Written 09-Jun-2017
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing the dramatic animation and your signature circularity. Your alliteration of "s's" and your many references added to the message. Your "human harps" and use of "chiseled" are memorable. Cheers- Joan
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Thank you for sharing the dramatic animation and your signature circularity. Your alliteration of "s's" and your many references added to the message. Your "human harps" and use of "chiseled" are memorable. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 07-Jun-2017
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello reconciled
I liked you tercet poem.
The way I read it you are telling us how gifted and blessed we are with all the happening of the past and when you said
where human harps make theremin music worships flute
soul weightless are waves spilled over oceans spiritual
vast as God said
Gert
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Hello reconciled
I liked you tercet poem.
The way I read it you are telling us how gifted and blessed we are with all the happening of the past and when you said
where human harps make theremin music worships flute
soul weightless are waves spilled over oceans spiritual
vast as God said
Gert
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Very interesting.
My favorite part: 'yesterday's mistakes wrought by choice
watch Peter's faith walk on water
Defeat washed by Jesus clean as childlike truth'
Outstanding artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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Very interesting.
My favorite part: 'yesterday's mistakes wrought by choice
watch Peter's faith walk on water
Defeat washed by Jesus clean as childlike truth'
Outstanding artwork. The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and the color of font chosen.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017
Comment from Ricky1024
To capture...
"The Pureness" one needs to be "Christlike"
Pure more than the snow for when melted the black epoch remains?
Surely man has not been touched to a degree to realize this yet.
Living by The Seven Deadly Sins and The Seven Laws of Judification we rob, pollute oor bodies with the poisons of addictions...
Want all and give little...
When will it end..
With our demise?
Well written and deep offering hope.
Ricky....
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To capture...
"The Pureness" one needs to be "Christlike"
Pure more than the snow for when melted the black epoch remains?
Surely man has not been touched to a degree to realize this yet.
Living by The Seven Deadly Sins and The Seven Laws of Judification we rob, pollute oor bodies with the poisons of addictions...
Want all and give little...
When will it end..
With our demise?
Well written and deep offering hope.
Ricky....
Comment Written 04-Jun-2017