Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi Gypsy
Your last line is me true I definitely not relaxed when I hear a Thunder storm starting to brew when I sleeping
I hate the echoing sound it makes

Now you have me inspired to try writing a haiku.

Gert

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 Comment Written 28-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

Thank you for the review, honey.
Gypsy

reply by Gert sherwood on 28-May-2017

You are welcome
Now when I post my try out haiku
Will you read it and let me know
(good or bad)

Gert

reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Sure thing :)

reply by the author on 29-May-2017

I went to your portfolio and I can't find your haiku

reply by Gert sherwood on 29-May-2017

I haven't; posted it yet will contact you and let you know when I do post it
Thank you Gypsy

Gert

reply by the author on 29-May-2017

Okay :)

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Gypsy!

I love midnight thunderstorms. If I only had a man, to hold onto during them, but too late I guess. LOL! I fell asleep last weekend to a thunderstorm--think it lulled me to sleep.

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 Comment Written 28-May-2017

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reply by the author on 28-May-2017

Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. I know what you mean. I fixed it. :)

Gypsy