2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "Haiku (midnight thunderstorm)"A collection of Japanese poetry
22 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Midnight thunderstorms aren't anything that I ever know about, since I'm sound asleep, and only a bomb can wake me until I'm ready to wake up. But thanks for the fine poem that allows me to see the storm through your mind. :-)
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Midnight thunderstorms aren't anything that I ever know about, since I'm sound asleep, and only a bomb can wake me until I'm ready to wake up. But thanks for the fine poem that allows me to see the storm through your mind. :-)
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Lucky you :) thank you for the review, Tic.
Gypsy
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
Again you've written a nice little poem.
I really enjoyed reading it too.
So I will be looking forward to reading more.
Kat
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Hi Gypsy,
Again you've written a nice little poem.
I really enjoyed reading it too.
So I will be looking forward to reading more.
Kat
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thank you
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You're welcome. Kat
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You're welcome. Kat
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You're welcome. Kat
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy, Excellent Haiku And I can see where you are coming from however for me I am under the covers with my ears blocked I am not a fan of storms. ( Childhood trauma LOL)Cheers Christineð???ð???
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hi Gypsy, Excellent Haiku And I can see where you are coming from however for me I am under the covers with my ears blocked I am not a fan of storms. ( Childhood trauma LOL)Cheers Christineð???ð???
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you, Chrissy, LoL
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
And there it is! Now I know! Beautifully written haiku Gypsy, it's truly amazing how something as wild as a storm soothes the soul. Perhaps it's the water, yes, that is the source of life that does it...who knows? Great satori, the puzzle? Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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And there it is! Now I know! Beautifully written haiku Gypsy, it's truly amazing how something as wild as a storm soothes the soul. Perhaps it's the water, yes, that is the source of life that does it...who knows? Great satori, the puzzle? Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you very much, I'm so glad you were able to read it this time. :)
Gypsy
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a great Haiku. I love thunderstorms at night. Sometimes I fight to stay awake to listen as the thunder booms me a sonnet, and the lighting flashes across the sky.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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This is a great Haiku. I love thunderstorms at night. Sometimes I fight to stay awake to listen as the thunder booms me a sonnet, and the lighting flashes across the sky.
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you for the review, Thomas.
Gypsy
Comment from MaggieF
The black background and white font works well. 'Midnight thunderstorm' this creates a very vivid picture in the mind. Funny how a thunderstorm can sooth the mind, clear it of uncertainly. MaggieF
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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The black background and white font works well. 'Midnight thunderstorm' this creates a very vivid picture in the mind. Funny how a thunderstorm can sooth the mind, clear it of uncertainly. MaggieF
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kindness.
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written haiku that made me think of those type of thunderstorms. You used very good descriptive wording. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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This is a very well written haiku that made me think of those type of thunderstorms. You used very good descriptive wording. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola Marival, this is a wonderful haiku. It says so much in so few words and that's the essence of haiku, of course. I loved it. Un abrazo de tu amiga. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hola Marival, this is a wonderful haiku. It says so much in so few words and that's the essence of haiku, of course. I loved it. Un abrazo de tu amiga. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Gracias Bonita :) thank you very much for the six stars.
Gypsy
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So well deserved.!!
Comment from Lindagail Hall
Nicely done, but I would have thought a thunderstorm would clear your mind as it washes away the negative we all carry.bthose echoes can be damn loud sometimes, I do really enjoy reading your writes
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Nicely done, but I would have thought a thunderstorm would clear your mind as it washes away the negative we all carry.bthose echoes can be damn loud sometimes, I do really enjoy reading your writes
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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The uncertainty is there....it has been there for a while but the thunderstorm helps. Thank you for the review.
Gypsy
Comment from DR DIP
Hmmm nice I can interpret a few from these 3 lines gypsy a literal interpretation but also a metaphorical interpretation but then again I suppose that's what haiku are all about
dip
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Hmmm nice I can interpret a few from these 3 lines gypsy a literal interpretation but also a metaphorical interpretation but then again I suppose that's what haiku are all about
dip
Comment Written 28-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you for the review, Dr dip.
Gypsy
