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Nature's Poetic Voice.

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A sensory appreciation of nature.

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Comment from l.raven
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HI Shirley, LOL...I love Winter...I see beauty in every season...but I most say...when it is time for Spring...I am ready...I love the way you described Spring...so very nicely written sweet girl...I love your poem...and love this picture...love ya you...Linda xxoo

I hope things are getting better...dryer...xxoo...love

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 06-Jun-2017
    Thanks Linda.
    Your support and good humour are appreciated.
    I figure my thermostat doesn't regulate so well anymore so it is usually too hot or too cold
    so autumn and spring suit me just fine but I do love the rebirth of everything in spring.
    :-) Shirley
reply by l.raven on 06-Jun-2017
    your so welcome you...I know what you mean...smiling back at ya...love xxoo
Comment from Sankey
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Well done for poetry and the lovely layout. Made a new friend in here that promoted a further addition to my Neighbours chapter.Was gonna ask how you were doing from the floods?

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
    Thank you for reviewing.
    I appreciate your response.
    We are taking each day as it comes as we have all been under extreme stress and ill
    since the flood.
    We are functioning but well below capacity.
    Thank you for your interest.
    :-) Shirley
reply by Sankey on 04-Jun-2017
    We can continue in prayer for you, Shirley. God Bless and thanks for the update.
Comment from Treischel
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I loved how well you ballanced the character of two seasons. The chill comes through, along with the yearning for spring. Lots of colorful imagery of spring. Great use of rhyme and alliteration. Well composed. It flows wonderfully and paints image.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
    Thanks so much for a lovely review.
    I appreciate your time when I have so little time to review.
    It has been very difficult since the devastation of the flood to find the time
    and energy to write and post.
    The stress has flared up the auto-immune system and just dealing with the financial, emotional and
    logistical decisions is quite stressful.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from honeytree
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Wonderful art work
for these words written
for this poem.
Yes seasons can be special for
all of us we certainly cannot
be with out them.

Honeytree

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
    Thank you.
    I appreciate your time and lovely review.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from Mustang Patty
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thank you for sharing this lovely poem about the seasons and all of the things each one brings. I have to agree with you, I love spring the best. It feels like a time of rebirth and the chance to start all over.

Lovely, just lovely...
~patty~

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
    Thank you Patty,
    Your time and comments are appreciated.
    :-) Shirley
Comment from Poetic Friend
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This poem covers the seasons well and the changes that accompany the seasons. You have painted stunning imagery. Your word choices make the readers feel the seasons.

Ironically, I used that same artwork for a poem that I wrote about the seasons. The poem is titled "Seasons of My Life" if you are interested in reading it.

Have a great weekend.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2017
    Thank you for reviewing.
    I agree -the artwork is stunning and I also have previously used it for poetry about the seasons of life.
    I would be happy to read tour poem.
    :-) Shirley