Just You Wait
Bullied no more31 total reviews
Comment from ZainaSaif
Nice Poem! It really shows how kids can be motivated and stand up to bullies! You deserved to get Recognized! Sorry about your brother! This is a great topic to write a poem about!
Keep Writing and Motivating- Zaina
p.s. I love that ending
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Nice Poem! It really shows how kids can be motivated and stand up to bullies! You deserved to get Recognized! Sorry about your brother! This is a great topic to write a poem about!
Keep Writing and Motivating- Zaina
p.s. I love that ending
Comment Written 29-May-2017
reply by the author on 29-May-2017
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Thanks so very much. I'm so glad you liked it. Your comments were from the heart and I appreciated it.
Comment from Teri7
This is a cute Kids poem you have penned for the contest. You used cute descriptive wording and cute imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a cute Kids poem you have penned for the contest. You used cute descriptive wording and cute imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 28-May-2017
Comment from Kazzawin
Never understood bullying.
Never could comprehend how someone could reduce someone else to feelings of embarrassment, unworthiness and fear.
Most victims survive and become strong.
I hope this little guy became a CEO because he would probably have the empathy and compassion to make a great boss : )
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Never understood bullying.
Never could comprehend how someone could reduce someone else to feelings of embarrassment, unworthiness and fear.
Most victims survive and become strong.
I hope this little guy became a CEO because he would probably have the empathy and compassion to make a great boss : )
Comment Written 28-May-2017
Comment from Mabaker
I must have been the luckiest unloved creature in the playground, I was never bullied never picked on never shown the back of anyone's hand. But that was all around me I escaped inside books and I found hidey-hole's where nobody knew I was. Great read, sincerely Mabaker
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I must have been the luckiest unloved creature in the playground, I was never bullied never picked on never shown the back of anyone's hand. But that was all around me I escaped inside books and I found hidey-hole's where nobody knew I was. Great read, sincerely Mabaker
Comment Written 28-May-2017
Comment from kriver
Hi loannalois,
This is a good poem for kids
I would imagine most of the people on this site
could probably relate in some way to your poem
It is clear in the message that is expressed
Best regards,
K River
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Hi loannalois,
This is a good poem for kids
I would imagine most of the people on this site
could probably relate in some way to your poem
It is clear in the message that is expressed
Best regards,
K River
Comment Written 27-May-2017
Comment from F. Wehr3
I thought your poem was cute and would be appealing to anyone who was ever bullied. I missed the vote for this one, but I see you you got a tie for second. Congrats!
Take care,
Russell
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I thought your poem was cute and would be appealing to anyone who was ever bullied. I missed the vote for this one, but I see you you got a tie for second. Congrats!
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 27-May-2017
Comment from KL Williams
I love this so much! I've been reading through things all morning, and this is my favorite so far. As a mother of two children, I would want them to read this everyday. It speaks so much truth! Great job, and good luck in the contest!
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I love this so much! I've been reading through things all morning, and this is my favorite so far. As a mother of two children, I would want them to read this everyday. It speaks so much truth! Great job, and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-May-2017
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
a clever little poem on bullying,
which, sadly, still goes on today
and affects children so badly.
My middle son was badly bullied at school -
simply because he was good-looking and creative
in art and music --- a gang of boys called him no
end of names and constantly shoved him about
until my son had a one to one fight
with the leader who was always threatening to
alter my son's face. Well, in the end I had to go
to the school - the headmaster said I was wasting
my time trying to get through to the boy - or his
father, as the family were all alike. I threatened
to include the police and the bullying stopped???
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
PS - you need to hit edit and further down the page there's a box where you can select "poetry" and then hit save - so it will go in with the poems wher it belongs.
Margaret
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a clever little poem on bullying,
which, sadly, still goes on today
and affects children so badly.
My middle son was badly bullied at school -
simply because he was good-looking and creative
in art and music --- a gang of boys called him no
end of names and constantly shoved him about
until my son had a one to one fight
with the leader who was always threatening to
alter my son's face. Well, in the end I had to go
to the school - the headmaster said I was wasting
my time trying to get through to the boy - or his
father, as the family were all alike. I threatened
to include the police and the bullying stopped???
Good luck with the contest, my friend.
PS - you need to hit edit and further down the page there's a box where you can select "poetry" and then hit save - so it will go in with the poems wher it belongs.
Margaret
Comment Written 27-May-2017
Comment from pome lover
this would be great for middle grade kids, or maybe elementary school kids would know what a CEO is.
Good story with problem, doing something about it, and solution - happy ending all wrapped up in a nifty short poem. good job.
And good for your brother!
pome lover
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this would be great for middle grade kids, or maybe elementary school kids would know what a CEO is.
Good story with problem, doing something about it, and solution - happy ending all wrapped up in a nifty short poem. good job.
And good for your brother!
pome lover
Comment Written 27-May-2017
Comment from oliver818
Great story, very good for all kids who are or were bullied. I hope they take your advice. I tried to be cool, failed miserably, haha. Now I teach engineer students who are all nerds, and great fun. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
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Great story, very good for all kids who are or were bullied. I hope they take your advice. I tried to be cool, failed miserably, haha. Now I teach engineer students who are all nerds, and great fun. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 27-May-2017