2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Haiku (Cold spell in May)"A collection of Japanese poetry
23 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A cold snap when it should be warm, can pick the senses and your poem brings reality to those thoughts, no where is the weather so unpredictable as in England! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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A cold snap when it should be warm, can pick the senses and your poem brings reality to those thoughts, no where is the weather so unpredictable as in England! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. Temperatures and weather patterns are extreme and wrong all over the world. We are on the edge if winter and there are still green leaves on the trees not even half of the leaves have shed till now.
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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A very well-written haiku. Temperatures and weather patterns are extreme and wrong all over the world. We are on the edge if winter and there are still green leaves on the trees not even half of the leaves have shed till now.
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 28-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from bookishfabler
Man, I wish we would have a cold spell right now. I have a bad cold or something and I'm sweating profusely with the Air conditioning on. At least your poem made me cool for a second/
hugs Heidi
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Man, I wish we would have a cold spell right now. I have a bad cold or something and I'm sweating profusely with the Air conditioning on. At least your poem made me cool for a second/
hugs Heidi
Comment Written 27-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Thank you for the review.
Gypsy
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I know what you are saying...right when I think we are getting a couple nice days here...it gets cold....I wish it would just stay warm...LOL...love your poem sweet girl...so good to see you...very nicely written...love ya you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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HI Gypsy, I know what you are saying...right when I think we are getting a couple nice days here...it gets cold....I wish it would just stay warm...LOL...love your poem sweet girl...so good to see you...very nicely written...love ya you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Hello, sweetie pie, it's so good to hear from you. How are you doing? I am finally getting used to my new place. Today was cool but nice. It's supposed to get hot by next week.... sigh... I like cool weather but sunny.
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie. Luv ya
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you are so very welcome sweet girl...always...I am doing fine...hope to be back in my home again soon...we have had two beautiful days this week...finally...a bit cool at night...I am so glad you are getting used to your new place...that will make it more better for you...God Bless...and take care...see you again soon...love ya lots...Linda xxoo
Comment from Mark Schardine
Thanks to the commentary, I understand your meaning. Here we have seen baffling May weather, and indeed, this year reminds us of our blind ignorance.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Thanks to the commentary, I understand your meaning. Here we have seen baffling May weather, and indeed, this year reminds us of our blind ignorance.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Hitcher
It would be driving me mad by now Gypsy, not having my computer : ) I liked your thought provoking haiku friend, I do not see man fixing the problem any time soon unfortunately but I do see a lot more super storms in our futures.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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It would be driving me mad by now Gypsy, not having my computer : ) I liked your thought provoking haiku friend, I do not see man fixing the problem any time soon unfortunately but I do see a lot more super storms in our futures.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words, Wayne.
Gypsy
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hello, Gypsy. A very different sort of haiku for you.
We, the human race, are completely oblivious to the damage we're inflicting on Mother Earth, the only place in the entire universe we can call home...for now.
Climate change, global warming--all of it is wreaking havoc on ecosystems all over the globe.
How long before Earth begins to retaliate and fight back?
Time will tell...if she hasn't already.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hello, Gypsy. A very different sort of haiku for you.
We, the human race, are completely oblivious to the damage we're inflicting on Mother Earth, the only place in the entire universe we can call home...for now.
Climate change, global warming--all of it is wreaking havoc on ecosystems all over the globe.
How long before Earth begins to retaliate and fight back?
Time will tell...if she hasn't already.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Yes, I have been reading Harold Henderson ans I am trying something different. Not having my laptop sucks.
I was waiting for my ride after my doctor's appointment and this came to me.
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
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It's always a pleasure to read your work, Gypsy Sensei.
I hope all goes well at the docs, darlin'.
Comment from Heather Knight
It looks beautiful, Marival. I didn't know you could do this with your Kindle. I know it has internet access but I've never used it myself. I just use it to read.
The weather over here is consistently hot, so I wish I had that cold spell.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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It looks beautiful, Marival. I didn't know you could do this with your Kindle. I know it has internet access but I've never used it myself. I just use it to read.
The weather over here is consistently hot, so I wish I had that cold spell.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Rasmine
Hello,
Hope you get your laptop soon.
I liked the cold spell in May. I don't care for summer because I'm stuck inside with the air conditioner. But now I cannot afford one so it will be an interesting summer. Glad the hallways and common rooms are air conditioned.
TC
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Hello,
Hope you get your laptop soon.
I liked the cold spell in May. I don't care for summer because I'm stuck inside with the air conditioner. But now I cannot afford one so it will be an interesting summer. Glad the hallways and common rooms are air conditioned.
TC
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
Comment from apky
This reminded me that only last week we had
snowfalls and in parts of the country the snow was 60cm high
and other parts had hailstones the size of golf balls.
This week has been rather nice and warm...
Hugs,
Aki
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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This reminded me that only last week we had
snowfalls and in parts of the country the snow was 60cm high
and other parts had hailstones the size of golf balls.
This week has been rather nice and warm...
Hugs,
Aki
Comment Written 26-May-2017
reply by the author on 26-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy