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Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

it may be an idea to go through this and insert end punctuation on the lines that don't end with exclamation marks or question marks. I know it's a dialogue comp, but there should still be correct punctuation.

She's just an furless Sphinx - just a furless...

Sigh! He smiles like the - using sigh here means the cat actually said it rather than done it.

I really like the idea here and the personification works well.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 17-Jun-2017
    I'm honored that you reviewed my dialogue. Thank you so much for coaching me, I really appreciated it. No one else picked up on those points
Comment from lalajovanoski
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Hello there friend I really enjoyed reading this story about the kitty I think that it is super cute and rather quite funny I absolutely adore my cats and I love this one too now thank you very much for sharing this

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
    I'm glad you got enjoyment reading it. That means more to me than any stars. My favorite breed of cat is the Persian. Thank you so much for reviewing
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Talking cats...there's a new idea. Cats at a cat show being jealous of each other... could be human women the way they talk. LOL! Yes, I'm female, but that doesn't mean I'm a stereotype. :)

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
    Of course,not all women are that way. But I have an idea that competition can bring out a certain cattiness. I'm glad it was a newer idea, talking cats, for you. You 'got' my gist. Thank you so much for the review and stars
    Trisha


    I enjoyed the rectameter poem challenge .
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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You have written an excellent poem. I'm a cat person. so naturally, anything with cats in it s going to catch my eye. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
    Hi Thomas, I love cats too. They are intriguing. I'm glad you enjoyed the dialogue, it had a reality about it with some human females. Of course not all are catty to each other. Thank you so much for your review and stars. I am glad you enjoyed the read
    Trisha
Comment from tfawcus
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A clever suggestion of the various characteristics of cats in this catty exchange, which nicely parallels the cattiness of the cakewalk! Your descriptions of the various types of cat brings them to mind rather well!

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
    I am glad the cattiness 'came across'. That, and pleasure from reading the dialogue were my goals. I am happy and honored that you reviewed my writing. Thank you so much
    Trisha
Comment from Sandollar
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This gave me so much pleasure to read. at the end of it, I realized my lips were smiling and had been this way all through the reading.
I like the tongue-in-cheek style of writing, Have you seen that deva Calico . I only found one error: diva. this was purrfectly delightful.

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 15-Jun-2017
    Your comments were wonderful, thank you so much. If I can bring pleasure or amusement to the reader, my goal is met. Also my spelling error is fixed now.
    Your review made my afternoon!
    Trisha