Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and I really like the imagery of the picture you chose. Great job. Teri

 Comment Written 23-May-2017

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reply by the author on 23-May-2017

Thanks, Teri.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

IF you find yourself in the desert and you are thirsty, the cactus know where the water is, follow them and you will find water. If you are desperate and in possession of a knife, cut into one and drink some of their water.

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

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reply by the author on 22-May-2017

Thank you, nomi.

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Very good tanka form poem creates a strong (thirsty!) mood and mental picture. Excellent use of artwork and colors. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Good job!

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

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reply by the author on 22-May-2017

Thank you, Kathleen, for the excellent review. Bill

reply by kathleenspalding on 23-May-2017

You're welcome

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about the feelings and visions, poet thinks so, of Saguaro cacti that can perform dancing in the desert and lead the water waltz, despite their state of status there; I liked.

 Comment Written 22-May-2017

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reply by the author on 22-May-2017

Thank you, ALD, for the great review. Bill