Soul-Mate
A Nanni16 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this lovely naani about love with a soul-mate. This kind of love really does exist and you've given us a glimpse into the feelings. Your presentation is lovely and very fitting for the poem. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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thank you for sharing this lovely naani about love with a soul-mate. This kind of love really does exist and you've given us a glimpse into the feelings. Your presentation is lovely and very fitting for the poem. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 24-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi Patty, Thanks for reviewing my Nonet and I am pleased to say it has won third place so that is a bonus. Cheers Christine😃👍
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Great wording. Perhaps another version would be:
You reach into my soul
and hold it gently in your hands.
You love me like no other can,
My Soul-Man.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Great wording. Perhaps another version would be:
You reach into my soul
and hold it gently in your hands.
You love me like no other can,
My Soul-Man.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi Thomas, Yes your suggestion could also work nicely Thanls so much for thinking about this and for your review much appreciated. Cheers
Comment from valmay
A very nice poem with an excellent choice of image of love and tenderness. A lot to express in twenty five syllables. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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A very nice poem with an excellent choice of image of love and tenderness. A lot to express in twenty five syllables. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi valmay, Thanks for reading and reviewing my nanni. A few words can say a lot I am pleased you liked this Cheers
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very sweet Naani love poem delivers a nice and understandable message using very few words. Excellent choice of artwork, color and words. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Very sweet Naani love poem delivers a nice and understandable message using very few words. Excellent choice of artwork, color and words. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi Kathleenspalding, Thank for your encouraging review I an pleased you stopped by Cheers
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You're welcome
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading this, I find it to be a good poem.
It consists of four lines with a syllable count: 6-8-8-3
Total syllable count: 25
I can clearly see that this poem meets the guidelines of the contest. Therefore, I think 'Soul-Mate' would make a good entry.
Lovely artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the portrait and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Naani Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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After reading this, I find it to be a good poem.
It consists of four lines with a syllable count: 6-8-8-3
Total syllable count: 25
I can clearly see that this poem meets the guidelines of the contest. Therefore, I think 'Soul-Mate' would make a good entry.
Lovely artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the portrait and the color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Naani Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi Nicole, Thanks for your feedback. I treoed to ensure I kept to the requirements while enjoying writing this and Many Cheers for your good luck message. Pleased to have your support Cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely composed naani poem. It has romance and tenderness. Reaching the soul as well as the heart makes that relationship special. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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This is a very nicely composed naani poem. It has romance and tenderness. Reaching the soul as well as the heart makes that relationship special. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-May-2017
reply by the author on 24-May-2017
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Hi Marilyn, Yes a soul mate is important and one feels very comfortable in the presence of one. Thanls for your review Cheers
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great play on words, warm, loving and resonatingly gentle. A soul mate can bring love into your heart and sooth, I wish you luck with the contest, a fine write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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A great play on words, warm, loving and resonatingly gentle. A soul mate can bring love into your heart and sooth, I wish you luck with the contest, a fine write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Hi Dolly. Thank you for your lovely words and luck wishes for my Nanni. Yes ones soul-mate is a bonus Cheers
Comment from Pantygynt
Some careful planning here has ended up with a twent-five syllable naani. This has an oriental flavour without the starkness of the Japanese equivalents, haiku and senryu, but the same feeling of depth of meaning from verbal economy.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Some careful planning here has ended up with a twent-five syllable naani. This has an oriental flavour without the starkness of the Japanese equivalents, haiku and senryu, but the same feeling of depth of meaning from verbal economy.
Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Hi Pantygynt, Thanks for taking a look at my Nanni and for your comments that are complimentary to the quest required Cheers
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani. We are lucky to find a special person we can call our soul mate. There s not a better connection to find on earth as the connection we find in our soul mate.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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A very well-written Naani. We are lucky to find a special person we can call our soul mate. There s not a better connection to find on earth as the connection we find in our soul mate.
Comment Written 22-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Hi Sandra,Thanks you for your review and yes a Soul-mate is the connection required Cheers
Comment from WalkerMan
This well-written Naani is an excellently concise expression of soul-mate love, and the apt illustration reinforces the effect. Yes, the uniqueness of how your partner cares for you is a good indicator of whether he or she is your soul-mate. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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This well-written Naani is an excellently concise expression of soul-mate love, and the apt illustration reinforces the effect. Yes, the uniqueness of how your partner cares for you is a good indicator of whether he or she is your soul-mate. Nicely done.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 22-May-2017
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Hi WalkerMan, Thanks for your review and suggestion, comma now in. Cheers
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You are welcome. I see the added comma and have revised the review, as is my custom, in order not to confuse others who may later read it. -- Mike
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Thank Mike Much appreciated Cheers
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You are again welcome. -- Mike