What's in a Name?
A dove is a pigeon with a better reputation.3 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Well, my favorite line is the title and not even in the poem. Love this:
"A Dove is a Pigeon with a Better Reputation."
However, you poem is good, too. Marilyn
Well, my favorite line is the title and not even in the poem. Love this:
"A Dove is a Pigeon with a Better Reputation."
However, you poem is good, too. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-May-2017
Comment from marybell1
I liked your 5-7-5 poem, I am sorry about the misunderstanding. (I thought the poem had to be about a blackbird) In your first line you used the plural "pigeons" and the singular "dove". Also in the naming of your poem "Misnomer" was written incorrectly. (Misnomer). You may wish to correct this. - or was this all intended? I have upgraded you to 5 stars now.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
I liked your 5-7-5 poem, I am sorry about the misunderstanding. (I thought the poem had to be about a blackbird) In your first line you used the plural "pigeons" and the singular "dove". Also in the naming of your poem "Misnomer" was written incorrectly. (Misnomer). You may wish to correct this. - or was this all intended? I have upgraded you to 5 stars now.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 21-May-2017
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Ouch! But your review made me take a fresh look, and I agreed the poem wasn't up to snuff. I think it's better now.
Thanks, Marybell.
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You are most welcome to five stars.
Marybell1.
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Thanks again, Marybell.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
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When I review I like to think that I have been of some help. I hope I do not offend.
All the best
Marybell1.
Comment from w.j.debi
Your description of the differences between doves and pigeons is an excellent play on words and the imagery we associate with them. Perfect syllable count. Best of luck in the contest.
Your description of the differences between doves and pigeons is an excellent play on words and the imagery we associate with them. Perfect syllable count. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2017