brave robin redbreast
5/7/5 Bye bye blackbird4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nicely composed 5-7-5 about the robin. They bring us joy and are the first sign of spring. Each word chosen makes your poem interesting for the reader. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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This is a very nicely composed 5-7-5 about the robin. They bring us joy and are the first sign of spring. Each word chosen makes your poem interesting for the reader. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Great review - thanks for reading zanya
Comment from smileycloud
Lovely
I really wish I could just say that as it really does describe your poem in a very dear and old fashioned way
but won't let me save it so
it has great flow on through the lines
I love the last line in particular as it speaks volumes on it's own and takes the reader to a very serene and tranquil place
the imagery of your 575 brings the picture to life
as I said (at the very beginning) LOL
Lovely
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Lovely
I really wish I could just say that as it really does describe your poem in a very dear and old fashioned way
but won't let me save it so
it has great flow on through the lines
I love the last line in particular as it speaks volumes on it's own and takes the reader to a very serene and tranquil place
the imagery of your 575 brings the picture to life
as I said (at the very beginning) LOL
Lovely
have a smiley day
Comment Written 21-May-2017
reply by the author on 27-May-2017
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Thanks for reading & critique zanya
Comment from papa55mike
Great job of writing this poem. I had to check rhythms to see if it was one syllable. It is according to my Webster's! I love the picture our American Robin's aren't has beautiful. I wish I had a six.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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Great job of writing this poem. I had to check rhythms to see if it was one syllable. It is according to my Webster's! I love the picture our American Robin's aren't has beautiful. I wish I had a six.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-May-2017
Comment from MaggieF
I love the picture of the Robin one of my favourite birds, Good imagery and subtle alliteration.The robin is a welcome sight in the garden at any time. MaggieF
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I love the picture of the Robin one of my favourite birds, Good imagery and subtle alliteration.The robin is a welcome sight in the garden at any time. MaggieF
Comment Written 20-May-2017