Anti-climactic
Unfortunately, it did not last.4 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I guess there isn't too much waiting done nowadays. Couples want to know what they are getting and who can blame them? A very good entry into the contest. Marilyn
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I guess there isn't too much waiting done nowadays. Couples want to know what they are getting and who can blame them? A very good entry into the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-May-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a great poem.
It has humor.
It consists of three lines that contain a syllable count of 5-7-5
This poem meets the requirements of the contest.
Good artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the font color chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Senryu.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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You've written a great poem.
It has humor.
It consists of three lines that contain a syllable count of 5-7-5
This poem meets the requirements of the contest.
Good artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the font color chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Senryu.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 21-May-2017
Comment from MaggieF
Good picture! What a let down, expectation is hard to fulfil. They need to concentrate on the old saying 'practise makes perfect' or read some good books on the subject!! Enjoyed this, could be a story in the telling. MaggieF
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Good picture! What a let down, expectation is hard to fulfil. They need to concentrate on the old saying 'practise makes perfect' or read some good books on the subject!! Enjoyed this, could be a story in the telling. MaggieF
Comment Written 20-May-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written senryu on recently married. It seems to be a shock for the couple when they get together for the first time, it was not what they expect at all and they both feel disappointed.
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A very well-written senryu on recently married. It seems to be a shock for the couple when they get together for the first time, it was not what they expect at all and they both feel disappointed.
Comment Written 20-May-2017
