Poems By AnnieDawn
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Childrens Games"My book of poems and stories
5 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I did enjoy reading this cute poem. I remember kick-the-can, too. Back in those days kids of all ages played together--and wasn't that nice? Last two lines are especially good, switching gears to your new neighbor. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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I did enjoy reading this cute poem. I remember kick-the-can, too. Back in those days kids of all ages played together--and wasn't that nice? Last two lines are especially good, switching gears to your new neighbor. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Times have changed haven't they. Thank for your kind review.
Comment from HollyD
Hahaha! Love the twist at the end! The timbre is beautifully childlike and the pyramid shape worked well. It reminded me of a speech by Mickey in Blood Brothers, complaining about always being the younger one and having a big brother. I don't have any suggestions for improvement! Holly :)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Hahaha! Love the twist at the end! The timbre is beautifully childlike and the pyramid shape worked well. It reminded me of a speech by Mickey in Blood Brothers, complaining about always being the younger one and having a big brother. I don't have any suggestions for improvement! Holly :)
Comment Written 06-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2017
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Thanks for the kind review. We all loved the game.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a GREAT read, especially for children.
--I remember that game. We used to play it while the knuckle heads cracked jokes: 'You're so poor, I saw you kicking a can. I asked what you were doing and you said, 'Moving.'- We used to think it was so funny.
The artwork is good. The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the art.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Etheree.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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This is a GREAT read, especially for children.
--I remember that game. We used to play it while the knuckle heads cracked jokes: 'You're so poor, I saw you kicking a can. I asked what you were doing and you said, 'Moving.'- We used to think it was so funny.
The artwork is good. The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the art.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Etheree.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 12-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Thanks so much for your kind review. It is fun composing poetry in the different styles that are presented in the various contests. I was unaware that there were so many varieties.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Ay yes, the good old games of our youth that most kids these days have never heard of, which is to their detriment. the youngest and smallest always lost out, but then time moves on and newer fodder arrive.
Nice well worked piece.
GMG
reply by the author on 11-May-2017
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Hi there,
Ay yes, the good old games of our youth that most kids these days have never heard of, which is to their detriment. the youngest and smallest always lost out, but then time moves on and newer fodder arrive.
Nice well worked piece.
GMG
Comment Written 10-May-2017
reply by the author on 11-May-2017
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Thanks so much for your kind review. It is fun composing poetry in the different styles that are presented in the various contests. I was unaware that there were so many varieties.
Comment from sunao
This is a fun children`s poem. This reminds me of my childhood when I would play hide and seek. Oh, how fun times those were! I would go back if I could but I also love being an adult so much. In the future, I want my children to have a good childhood. I hope that you have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 11-May-2017
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This is a fun children`s poem. This reminds me of my childhood when I would play hide and seek. Oh, how fun times those were! I would go back if I could but I also love being an adult so much. In the future, I want my children to have a good childhood. I hope that you have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 10-May-2017
reply by the author on 11-May-2017
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Thanks so much for your kind review. It is fun composing poetry in the different styles that are presented in the various contests. I was unaware that there were so many varieties.
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Your welcome!
