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2017 JAPANESE POETRY

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A collection of Japanese poetry

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Comment from Lilol
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So true gypsy. He does make them look so much like fools. This is very interesting and cool. Can you email me writing tips? I just started writing on fanstory.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2017

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
    Thank you lilol :) I will send you a private message.

    Thank you

    Gypsy
Comment from lalajovanoski
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I really liked reading this poem and think that it is a good 5 7 5 for the movie contest. I loved this movie! Great pic and sound that accompany it nicely. best of luck!

 Comment Written 09-May-2017

reply by the author on 09-May-2017
    Thank you very much for the review.

    Gypsy
Comment from Hitcher
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Not only them, he is quite good at making the dead, and soon to be dead look like fools too. My girls love the movies and will be Queuing up to see the knew one net week here in NZ I believe. Good luck!

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    Thank you, my friend :) I can't wait to go see it.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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Another good Haiku, dean. Chaulk up another win. You're on a streak. What is this three billion in a row. That's a record that will be hard to beat.

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    I am sorry to disappoint you but this is not Dean. Thank you for the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I agree with this quote! And of course Jack Sparrow is an American! So getting in on the act is inherent in the genes! Only joking! Great entry for this competition! Good luck! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    Thank you very much :)
Comment from Irish Rain
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What a great haiku entry for this haiku movie contest! Do you believe I've never seen this one? And I love movies!! Good luck to you, blessings...

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    Thank you very much :)
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Thank you for sharing this 5-7-5 about a movie. Pirates of the Caribbean was one of my favorite Johnny Depp movies. Jack Sparrow is one of the greatest characters - ever. Within the contest of your poem, you've captured the essence of the movie. Good luck in the contest!
~patty~

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    Thank you very much :)
Comment from frierajac
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Thanks for posting this although it is advertising, I appreciate the intention.
I like the idea of haiku as an advertising platform as this to me seems new, although I guess it has been utilized and I just have never noticed.

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

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    Thank you very much :)
Comment from tfawcus
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Nice line division here so that Empire can refer to both the Spanish Empire and the British Empire. I wouldn't be afraid of offending anyone! Both empires looked pretty foolish at times!

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

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    Thank you very much :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written haiku, movie review. Even I enjoyed the Pirates if the Caribbean movie. I don't know if it is because of Johnny Depp or Captain Jack Sparrow. Lol.

 Comment Written 08-May-2017

reply by the author on 08-May-2017
    Thank you very much :)