Life's balance sheet
Haiku movie review/Schindler's list2 total reviews
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
"Schlinder's List"- Good Idea for a poem.
It has three lines.
Each line has a syllable count: 5-7-5
--I had to read the second line over and over before I could finally realize that 'altruism', although when pronounced seems to have 4 syllables, actually only has 3 syllables.
Nice artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color matches the photo. Thumbs up on the font color.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Haiku.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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"Schlinder's List"- Good Idea for a poem.
It has three lines.
Each line has a syllable count: 5-7-5
--I had to read the second line over and over before I could finally realize that 'altruism', although when pronounced seems to have 4 syllables, actually only has 3 syllables.
Nice artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color matches the photo. Thumbs up on the font color.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Haiku.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 08-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A very good example of Haiku. When it all comes down to it God keeps the books and Saint Peter is the accountant. Someday we must account for everything.
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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A very good example of Haiku. When it all comes down to it God keeps the books and Saint Peter is the accountant. Someday we must account for everything.
Comment Written 07-May-2017
reply by the author on 12-May-2017
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Thanks for the critique zanya