Comment from donette1914

Excellent

this is too cute and i felt you did a very nice job and the photo was adorable and hopefully he wont get the swine flu. it was a pleasure to read your work, a well penned poem

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 05-May-2017

Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from kathleenspalding

Excellent

Hahaha! Funny poem and adorable, but slightly gross, picture. Excellent use of artwork, visual space, and words. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Thanks! Glad you got a laugh. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

reply by kathleenspalding on 04-May-2017

You're welcome :-)

Comment from Vijay Kumar V

Excellent

Haha, Well done, you did a pretty good job in so few words. A good entry to the contest. Have a wonderful week. Good luck. Thanks for sharing.Namaskaram

 Comment Written 04-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Thanks! Glad you got a laugh. Appreciate your comments ... ;-)

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

you have the right amount of words and the context is comprehensible. The picture is disgusting, I can't believe the parents let that baby kiss the pig's nose... yeek!
I don't think the poem is funny.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Appreciate your comments. Sorry you don't see the humor.

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Thanks for making me puke in my mouth. The last time I did that I was reading one of DeanKuch's poems. I need to buy some Listerine.

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Listerine can work wonders. Hope you're feeling better, now. Cheers .. ;o)

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your entry in the 8-word contest. Your piece is certainly humorous and you have complimented it with the perfect picture. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Thanks! I'm happy you found this piece funny and liked the picture. Cheers ... ;-)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

What a laugh! The picture is amazing and kissing a pig would not be wise! Your words are fun and I wish you good luck with the competition, best wishes,regards Dolly x

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Thanks, Dolly. Glad you got a laugh and liked the picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

You've managed to pen a good one in just 8 words.
I've had my laugh for the day. I know he/she is a baby, but that is hilarious!
Great artwork: The image is priceless. It fits the poem perfectly.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Thanks! Glad you liked this poem and picture. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an adorable picture and words must be hard to keep track of the little ones all the time, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Thanks. Glad you liked this poem and picture. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)

Comment from TheWriteTeach

Exceptional

This is so cute. It's a good thing it really doesn't work that way, or almost all farm kids would be sick! I grew up on a farm and married a farmer. I've always had pigs around, and they do, just as the picture shows, stick their noses to your face, as though kissing you. I think you did a super job with this. Good luck in the contest.

Suzanne

 Comment Written 03-May-2017

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reply by the author on 04-May-2017

Thanks, Suzanne. So glad you enjoyed this little poem and the picture. I'm happy you could relate to the theme from personal experience. Some reviewers didn't find this piece humorous and the picture made them sick.

Appreciate all your comments and I'm thrilled with the special rating !! Cheers ... ;o)