2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "senryu (minuscule)"A collection of Japanese poetry
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Comment from Gloria ....
Yep, I know how you feel, Gypsy. I feel like this when I get out into the huge Rocky Mountains or the Pacific Ocean. We certainly do understand our very small size in overall picture of a bigger planet.
Excellent and a new form to me, so many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Yep, I know how you feel, Gypsy. I feel like this when I get out into the huge Rocky Mountains or the Pacific Ocean. We certainly do understand our very small size in overall picture of a bigger planet.
Excellent and a new form to me, so many thanks for sharing.
Gloria
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :) I am glad you can relate.
Namaste
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Douglas Paul
LOL - I am not sure how essential we are but I sure like being here. This is a good one, my friend. I like the insight in this and you wording is really mystical and meaningful
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LOL - I am not sure how essential we are but I sure like being here. This is a good one, my friend. I like the insight in this and you wording is really mystical and meaningful
Comment Written 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, Douglas. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :) Namaste
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles Gypsy leave it up to you,you come up with haiku and senyru that are of different styles
to answer you question
all yes
it evoked memories and/or emotions
how is the presentation? I could envision the ocean
yes it's about nature?
Gert
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Smiles Gypsy leave it up to you,you come up with haiku and senyru that are of different styles
to answer you question
all yes
it evoked memories and/or emotions
how is the presentation? I could envision the ocean
yes it's about nature?
Gert
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. :) Namaste
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Gypsy, A lovely senyru that allows us to be part of the great universe and although minuscule in the scheme of expanse we are essential to each other existence. A great reflection of a moment in time. cheers Christineð???ð???
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hi Gypsy, A lovely senyru that allows us to be part of the great universe and although minuscule in the scheme of expanse we are essential to each other existence. A great reflection of a moment in time. cheers Christineð???ð???
Comment Written 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
My little granddaughter asked the other day, she said, "I'm good at school but sometimes not with mummy...why?" I don't think I could have answered her in a way she understood, aren't children wonderful? Great haiku, Gypsy, I don't know if a childless person may understand, well done, blessings, Roy
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My little granddaughter asked the other day, she said, "I'm good at school but sometimes not with mummy...why?" I don't think I could have answered her in a way she understood, aren't children wonderful? Great haiku, Gypsy, I don't know if a childless person may understand, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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I mean Mother nature and sentient beings are all people, animal, plants... all living things. Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
It's always nice to read you poems as you are wonderful at writing them.
This one was interesting as your poetry always is. You are great at
writing many kinds.
Kat
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Hi Gypsy,
It's always nice to read you poems as you are wonderful at writing them.
This one was interesting as your poetry always is. You are great at
writing many kinds.
Kat
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
Gypsy hugs
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It was so cute to get your Gypsy hugs.
Thank you for them. Kat
Comment from DR DIP
It sort of how I feel when I go to the ocean as well but I become one of those minuscule souls that venture out and surf in it. Loving the photo it reminds me of a poem I posted a while back called "with the will to fly". Thankyou for sharing Gypsy.
dip
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It sort of how I feel when I go to the ocean as well but I become one of those minuscule souls that venture out and surf in it. Loving the photo it reminds me of a poem I posted a while back called "with the will to fly". Thankyou for sharing Gypsy.
dip
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jay Squires
Of course the basis for the primary corollary in the reader's mind is the human "mother/child" relationship. Without that mindset, could we likely take the creative leap to envision the larger relationships that exist between the smaller and the larger (to which the former is totally dependent)? Thanks to your hint, we have the power and beauteous enormity of the ocean, at the shore of which gazes the minuscule human. Same with mountains; same with thunder; indeed the universe.
This shows the poetic form at it's most eloquent. Thanks, Gypsy, for sharing it.
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Of course the basis for the primary corollary in the reader's mind is the human "mother/child" relationship. Without that mindset, could we likely take the creative leap to envision the larger relationships that exist between the smaller and the larger (to which the former is totally dependent)? Thanks to your hint, we have the power and beauteous enormity of the ocean, at the shore of which gazes the minuscule human. Same with mountains; same with thunder; indeed the universe.
This shows the poetic form at it's most eloquent. Thanks, Gypsy, for sharing it.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
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I mean Mother Nature. Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :) Thank you very much for the six stars! You are most generous.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Hitcher
Nice to see you in my message box this morning friend, I loved your little senryu and know how much you love the ocean. It has the ability to cause us to pause and ponder our place in the universe and our place on this planet. Very Nice!
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Nice to see you in my message box this morning friend, I loved your little senryu and know how much you love the ocean. It has the ability to cause us to pause and ponder our place in the universe and our place on this planet. Very Nice!
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :) Thank you for the six stars, Hitcher. You are most generous.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from loismddavis
I have learned something s I did not know that a senryru is something miniscule and a sketch from life. You have done a perfect job with a beautiful and religious description of a small creature. beautifully done.
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I have learned something s I did not know that a senryru is something miniscule and a sketch from life. You have done a perfect job with a beautiful and religious description of a small creature. beautifully done.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words. :) A senryu is a haiku about human nature and without a kigo (season word).
Gypsy hugs
