My Mind
My mind is easier than reality sometimes21 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
Fine lyrics make a song which reminded me of Willie Nelson's song "Always On My Mind." Your lyrics are my favorite type because it told a story that was compelling and moving about a traveler who wonders why love is hard to find. Your rhymed verse flows naturally to your chorus:
in my mind love's easy to find
while I'm here I'm not behind
as I believe what's in my mind
I can hear your song being sung as I read it. This is quite effective.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you much success in the contest.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Fine lyrics make a song which reminded me of Willie Nelson's song "Always On My Mind." Your lyrics are my favorite type because it told a story that was compelling and moving about a traveler who wonders why love is hard to find. Your rhymed verse flows naturally to your chorus:
in my mind love's easy to find
while I'm here I'm not behind
as I believe what's in my mind
I can hear your song being sung as I read it. This is quite effective.
Thank you for sharing. I wish you much success in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you very much for this review it is encouraging and one day I might learn something about music to help my cause****kahpot
