My Mind
My mind is easier than reality sometimes21 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
In your mind is where everything 'to be' in your life is created. What you think, feel, believe...is what comes true for you...SO...this is wonderful. Believe your mind, your love will appear!!! Blessings...
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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In your mind is where everything 'to be' in your life is created. What you think, feel, believe...is what comes true for you...SO...this is wonderful. Believe your mind, your love will appear!!! Blessings...
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you very much for your time and excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Pantygynt
I could see this one working in a musical sense and the length is about right. I only had one problem with understanding the meaning here:
"for all the world as not the range
to take this thought or to change..." I don't understand this sentence as it is written here. Did you mean:
"for all the world has not the range
to take this thought or to change..."
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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I could see this one working in a musical sense and the length is about right. I only had one problem with understanding the meaning here:
"for all the world as not the range
to take this thought or to change..." I don't understand this sentence as it is written here. Did you mean:
"for all the world has not the range
to take this thought or to change..."
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you Pantygynt for your excellent review, where you have asked about (did I mean) yes I certainly did thank you****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This ia a very good contest entry. Good luck. I'm sure you will do well. Your writing is well thought out and flows nicely. The other writers better take notice.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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This ia a very good contest entry. Good luck. I'm sure you will do well. Your writing is well thought out and flows nicely. The other writers better take notice.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend you are right if you are safe in your mind , you will be safe anywhere, here you can create youwn love and be happy with it. So why look for it elsewhere. Great write and so much conviction.
Danny Jock.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Hi friend you are right if you are safe in your mind , you will be safe anywhere, here you can create youwn love and be happy with it. So why look for it elsewhere. Great write and so much conviction.
Danny Jock.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from royowen
These are excellent lyrics for a possible melody to join with a musical melody, not quite a ballad, but would probably fall into that category, certainly part of the country spectrum, I thought they are most lyrical, I guess one could form and chorus or a bridge, but well done, excellent entry, well done, Good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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These are excellent lyrics for a possible melody to join with a musical melody, not quite a ballad, but would probably fall into that category, certainly part of the country spectrum, I thought they are most lyrical, I guess one could form and chorus or a bridge, but well done, excellent entry, well done, Good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot
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Most welcome
Comment from dragonpoet
Strong entry for the contest. Good luck.
This poem tells of a soul searching for love that seems to allude him even though he thinks it should be easy to find.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Strong entry for the contest. Good luck.
This poem tells of a soul searching for love that seems to allude him even though he thinks it should be easy to find.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for your excellent review****kahpot
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Any time.
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Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your lyrics with us. The song you've created within this poem moves along with a nice rhythm. The lines logically flow and the story told is one of the search for love. The rhymes you've chosen are all true, and nothing feels stiff or contrived. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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thank you for sharing your lyrics with us. The song you've created within this poem moves along with a nice rhythm. The lines logically flow and the story told is one of the search for love. The rhymes you've chosen are all true, and nothing feels stiff or contrived. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you very much for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Here the poet thinks within mind and tries to find out love, he believes it is easy to as he travels around the world in mind, so the lyrics make the song out of heart's feeling; I enjoyed the efforts shared read.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Here the poet thinks within mind and tries to find out love, he believes it is easy to as he travels around the world in mind, so the lyrics make the song out of heart's feeling; I enjoyed the efforts shared read.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from MaggieF
This flows like a good country song. Sometimes we try too hard to find love and if we are really lucky love finds us! The rhyming scheme makes this poem/song very catchy. Enjoyed. MaggieF
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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This flows like a good country song. Sometimes we try too hard to find love and if we are really lucky love finds us! The rhyming scheme makes this poem/song very catchy. Enjoyed. MaggieF
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you very much for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I like these. They seem very well written, my friend. I always wonder how they would sound when sung. These seem like they would work well. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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I like these. They seem very well written, my friend. I always wonder how they would sound when sung. These seem like they would work well. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you very much, Debbie, for your time and review much appreciated****kahpot
