My Mind
My mind is easier than reality sometimes21 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Often we survive by going to our inner 'dogma' a place where we can rest and stay away from stress and renew our souls, I identified with your poem very much, wise words and a I wish your luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Often we survive by going to our inner 'dogma' a place where we can rest and stay away from stress and renew our souls, I identified with your poem very much, wise words and a I wish your luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes the mind is a good escape when needed****kahpot
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good song and the chorus is easy to remember. A well known song writer once said, the art of writing a hit song ifs to make sure people can sing along with the chorus and you have done that so well done. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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This is a good song and the chorus is easy to remember. A well known song writer once said, the art of writing a hit song ifs to make sure people can sing along with the chorus and you have done that so well done. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you very much for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Sanku
That is an interesting write for a song. I tried to sing it in my mind and the refrain
In my mind love's easy to find
whileI'm here I' not behind
As I believe whats in my mind.
echoes very well.All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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That is an interesting write for a song. I tried to sing it in my mind and the refrain
In my mind love's easy to find
whileI'm here I' not behind
As I believe whats in my mind.
echoes very well.All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you very much for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from oliver818
I like your son lyrics, they flow well, and I can imagine how this song would sound. I like the repetition of alone again. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with the competition
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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I like your son lyrics, they flow well, and I can imagine how this song would sound. I like the repetition of alone again. Thanks for sharing and best of luck with the competition
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello mystery songwriter,
I could sort of hear a melody - a melancholy sort of one - in my head as I read. (Eek that almost sounds like a line in a song, doesn't it??)
I like the rhyming couplets interspersed by the aaa mono-rhyme.
Enjoyed the song. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Hello mystery songwriter,
I could sort of hear a melody - a melancholy sort of one - in my head as I read. (Eek that almost sounds like a line in a song, doesn't it??)
I like the rhyming couplets interspersed by the aaa mono-rhyme.
Enjoyed the song. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you very much and yes you did line a movement there much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
in my mind love's easy to find
while I'm here I'm not behind
as I believe what's in my mind
forward I'll go with lasting hope
to leave in mind a waking note
in time to come, I'd like again
confide with you to ease my pain
alone again out loud I'd say
why do I lead my mind astray
be-cause
in my mind love's easy to find
while I'm here I'm not behind
as I believe what's in my mind
I loved these lyrics, very well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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in my mind love's easy to find
while I'm here I'm not behind
as I believe what's in my mind
forward I'll go with lasting hope
to leave in mind a waking note
in time to come, I'd like again
confide with you to ease my pain
alone again out loud I'd say
why do I lead my mind astray
be-cause
in my mind love's easy to find
while I'm here I'm not behind
as I believe what's in my mind
I loved these lyrics, very well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 03-May-2017
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Thank you very much, you are so encouraging and give me inspiration****kahpot
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Nice rhythm and rhyme you've written.
--My mind is wondering about a lot of things.
Great artwork: The image shown fits the writing well.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your lyrics.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Nice rhythm and rhyme you've written.
--My mind is wondering about a lot of things.
Great artwork: The image shown fits the writing well.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your lyrics.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written poem that depicts believing in oneself is the way to go.
The mind is such a powerful tool, if only people would use it as such.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Well written poem that depicts believing in oneself is the way to go.
The mind is such a powerful tool, if only people would use it as such.
Should make an interesting entry into this contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you very much for an excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Nichola
It is apparent, that your words are sincere. They express a human vulnerability that is so beautiful, it lifts the reader outside of herself. Your words are nurturing and express clear thought. Your poem flows well, and has the tapestry of a song.
Nichola
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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It is apparent, that your words are sincere. They express a human vulnerability that is so beautiful, it lifts the reader outside of herself. Your words are nurturing and express clear thought. Your poem flows well, and has the tapestry of a song.
Nichola
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thankyou mvery much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from XGoneX
Hi,
Many times life is focused on appearances, material things, the love word used without being honestly felt. Love that surrounds us can also be ephemeral. Sometimes only within our imagination we can feel and live more authentically.
Catchy and meaningful lyrics.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Hi,
Many times life is focused on appearances, material things, the love word used without being honestly felt. Love that surrounds us can also be ephemeral. Sometimes only within our imagination we can feel and live more authentically.
Catchy and meaningful lyrics.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thank you very much, Targaryen for your excellent review****kahpot
