Rescued
She came at a difficult time in life9 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Author tries to depict love as a matter of rescue, support, help, caring and association to make a relation based on attraction, appeal, interest and need for survival in course of living.
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Author tries to depict love as a matter of rescue, support, help, caring and association to make a relation based on attraction, appeal, interest and need for survival in course of living.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Thank you for your read and your review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about love and what your partner means to you. She rescued you with the love she have and give to you. A love that seems to never end.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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A very well-written free verse poem about love and what your partner means to you. She rescued you with the love she have and give to you. A love that seems to never end.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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You got it. Thank you for your read and your review.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
This is a loving poem of word from one spouse to the other about their gratefulness for their undying love. Their love has stood and passed the tests of time and they are still enjoying togetherness, Most people these days think that marriages of togetherness this way does not last and end up quickly in divorces. However, there are still marriages and relationships like the one you are describing here. I finally have one of these marriages. I can picture myself as the spouse saying this to my husband in the scenery you described. Thank you for this glimpse of what true love is like.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
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This is a loving poem of word from one spouse to the other about their gratefulness for their undying love. Their love has stood and passed the tests of time and they are still enjoying togetherness, Most people these days think that marriages of togetherness this way does not last and end up quickly in divorces. However, there are still marriages and relationships like the one you are describing here. I finally have one of these marriages. I can picture myself as the spouse saying this to my husband in the scenery you described. Thank you for this glimpse of what true love is like.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for the read and your review. I am happy you are sharing contentment.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Words straight from the heart to the love of your life with loving sentiments and warm memories of appreciation, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
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Words straight from the heart to the love of your life with loving sentiments and warm memories of appreciation, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much for the read and the review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author a very touching love poem written in free verse telling us of a happy and loving time you are having (it seems for many years)
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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Hello author a very touching love poem written in free verse telling us of a happy and loving time you are having (it seems for many years)
Gert
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for the read and the comment. Appreciate it.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Dean Kuch
And through it all
Joys and problems
I thrived because of
Your loving support
Thank you for my life
And for spending it with me ... Yes, this is the way it's "supposed" to be, Anonymous Poet.
Sadly, that's not quite the way it worked out for some of us.
Lord, Alfred Tennyson once wrote in his poem, "In Memoriam", the following:
"I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all." ...I, for one, completely disagree. You cannot miss something you've never had.
Great poem.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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And through it all
Joys and problems
I thrived because of
Your loving support
Thank you for my life
And for spending it with me ... Yes, this is the way it's "supposed" to be, Anonymous Poet.
Sadly, that's not quite the way it worked out for some of us.
Lord, Alfred Tennyson once wrote in his poem, "In Memoriam", the following:
"I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all." ...I, for one, completely disagree. You cannot miss something you've never had.
Great poem.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Dean, for the read and the review.
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My pleasure, good luck. :}
Comment from TravelGypsy
Sounds honest and heart felt. You are lucky to find your true love. Thank your sharing this slice of your life with us. I did however find a few minor mistakes regarding capitalization.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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Sounds honest and heart felt. You are lucky to find your true love. Thank your sharing this slice of your life with us. I did however find a few minor mistakes regarding capitalization.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the read and review. What are the mistakes? Would appreciate a response so I may edit.
Comment from MaggieF
Beautiful picture and the sand colour of the background connects it to your poem. A lovely romantic poem. It's good to count your blessings. I like the sea analogy. Good rtythm. Maggie a
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Beautiful picture and the sand colour of the background connects it to your poem. A lovely romantic poem. It's good to count your blessings. I like the sea analogy. Good rtythm. Maggie a
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your read and your review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to love and how it can save us. Your entry for the What is Love poetry contest is a great free verse piece that brings a great deal of joy. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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thank you for sharing this beautiful tribute to love and how it can save us. Your entry for the What is Love poetry contest is a great free verse piece that brings a great deal of joy. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your read and your review.
