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What has the electoral college wrought?

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Comment from Nottoway
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The voters seemed to decide to promote a person who said the things that they wanted to hear. It became okay to spew hatred and false promises. This became acceptable because many believed this bombastic demeanor was what leadership looked like instead of consideration and decorum.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
    I agree whole-heartily with you analysis. Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from Thal1959
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Nicely stated, if one dislikes Trump as I suppose you do. I did not vote for him, but in my opinion, Clinton would have been a travesty. To answer your question, "What has the electoral college wrought?" It has wrought the lesser of two evils. But that is only because both parties nominated the worst person possible.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
    Thanks for your read and your review. Appreciate it. It is wonderful that in this world, thus far, we do not have to agree and yet are free to express our opinions. I don't agree that Trump was the lesser of two evils. He is just one big evil with little concern for the environment, proper medical care for the common people and is placing a family members to establish a Romanoff-like dynasty with his daughter and son-in-law.
reply by Thal1959 on 27-Apr-2017
    You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Thank you for sharing your political senryu about dear old Mr. Trump. His election would've been completely different if the popular vote counted for anything. Your few syllables tell the story well. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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but better than a murderer.

Good job on your contest entry, Your syllable count is correct. You followed the rules nicely. Your poem does make a strong statement.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the read and the review.