Sometimes
Pining for what used to be33 total reviews
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
I love this sometimes dialouge and this is my favourite of all, "Am I just a memory
HIM (SPOKEN): Sometimes"
Really a great entry to the contest. Have a great day. Namaskaram
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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I love this sometimes dialouge and this is my favourite of all, "Am I just a memory
HIM (SPOKEN): Sometimes"
Really a great entry to the contest. Have a great day. Namaskaram
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Now that the contest is over, I can respond to the reviews I received.
In many breakups, isn't "sometimes" the way both people often feel?
That tinge of regret.
Also, appreciate the six stars!
Comment from Dean Kuch
The dude in your artwork looks a lot like Willie Nelson, Anonymous Poet/lyricist.
I enjoyed this. It's touchingly sentimental and sublimely sarcastic (a bit), but sweet.
Sometimes you simply can't get over the pain someone's caused you to take another chance.
Believe me, I know...
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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The dude in your artwork looks a lot like Willie Nelson, Anonymous Poet/lyricist.
I enjoyed this. It's touchingly sentimental and sublimely sarcastic (a bit), but sweet.
Sometimes you simply can't get over the pain someone's caused you to take another chance.
Believe me, I know...
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Always appreciate your comments and support.
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You are more than welcome, Brett.
Take care,
~Dean
Comment from cupa tea
She tears at the label on the bottle in her hand and wonders
She tears?
I liked the song with the spoken parts...I think it would make a good video with the song. Nicely done..Good luck!
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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She tears at the label on the bottle in her hand and wonders
She tears?
I liked the song with the spoken parts...I think it would make a good video with the song. Nicely done..Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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"tears" - to peel.
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Appreciate you taking the time to write a review.
Comment from JDRBAR
Willie's passing will sorely be missed by those of us who grew up "country." I like this very much. And, I knew it had nothing to do with drink. But, I'm still puzzled by what they wanted to share...a memory, a night together, or a special time?
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Willie's passing will sorely be missed by those of us who grew up "country." I like this very much. And, I knew it had nothing to do with drink. But, I'm still puzzled by what they wanted to share...a memory, a night together, or a special time?
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017
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Willie's passing? Now, that would be news.
He is quite alive and well, and actually will turn 84 on Saturday.
Where did you pick up he passed?
Comment from lyenochka
This is a very interesting format -- kinda like a country-western opera/musical. I like the dialog as songs sung back and forth. Thanks also for the info on Willie Nelson and Tigger.
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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This is a very interesting format -- kinda like a country-western opera/musical. I like the dialog as songs sung back and forth. Thanks also for the info on Willie Nelson and Tigger.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Appreciate you taking the time to write a review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
this was a lovely song - I could see it being acted out clear as day. Your characters can be either old or young - but its evident the love they once had is hanging on in their memories. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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this was a lovely song - I could see it being acted out clear as day. Your characters can be either old or young - but its evident the love they once had is hanging on in their memories. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Doesn't that often occur with a breakup?
A small part still hangs on even though you know it is over.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem/song between a man and his guitar, that have an unbreakable connection. The one cannot continue with the other, they both need one another.
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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A very well-written poem/song between a man and his guitar, that have an unbreakable connection. The one cannot continue with the other, they both need one another.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Song not about Willie Nelson and his guitar.
Glad you enjoyed these lyrics though.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It's an excellent performance piece. You have written a very good contest entry. It should do well. It meets all of the requirements and then some.
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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It's an excellent performance piece. You have written a very good contest entry. It should do well. It meets all of the requirements and then some.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Writing Country music has always been my preferred genre, although as a Freelance Writer, I do dabble in other formats as well.
Appreciate the review.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
But, this is the way that it must always remain
Losing you has brought me too much pain
We can't go back, undo what has been done
Still, I wish there was a way we could share one
(pause) sometimes
I loved this poem about Willie and also the info about Trigger. So clever.Well done. Kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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But, this is the way that it must always remain
Losing you has brought me too much pain
We can't go back, undo what has been done
Still, I wish there was a way we could share one
(pause) sometimes
I loved this poem about Willie and also the info about Trigger. So clever.Well done. Kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Poem not about Willie and Trigger.
It is about the regret often times felt after a relationship has broken up.
Appreciate the review.
Comment from dragonpoet
This is such a sad song. They seem to really still love each other and both afraid getting back together would end the same way. It seems like in the end they are thinking of a one night stand for old time sake or a final goodbye.
Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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This is such a sad song. They seem to really still love each other and both afraid getting back together would end the same way. It seems like in the end they are thinking of a one night stand for old time sake or a final goodbye.
Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-May-2017
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Appreciate you taking the time to write a review.
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You're welcome.
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