Sometimes
Pining for what used to be33 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Well, that was fantastic, I loved it. And who in the world don't know Willie, must live under a rock if they don't. lol. You said in your notes how some, misconstrued, Ahh, they hell with em' some people are just senseless, lol. there's not even - a have to read between the lines here. ha-crystal clarity to me, totally got, love the line breaks, I thought you did a bang up job here. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Well, that was fantastic, I loved it. And who in the world don't know Willie, must live under a rock if they don't. lol. You said in your notes how some, misconstrued, Ahh, they hell with em' some people are just senseless, lol. there's not even - a have to read between the lines here. ha-crystal clarity to me, totally got, love the line breaks, I thought you did a bang up job here. ~Kerry
Comment Written 03-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Comment from LaRosa
Promise, I got it. :)
The structure of your lost love poem is unusual, very original, and very well done.
One can picture, feel what it would be like to run into a past love when you least expect it.
All the questions we think, even ruminate over, are the center of this poem:
Do you ever miss me? Am I just a memory? (for me...Am I even a memory?)
If yes, Is there still a chance?
But 'sometimes' is never enough to take chances on...
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Promise, I got it. :)
The structure of your lost love poem is unusual, very original, and very well done.
One can picture, feel what it would be like to run into a past love when you least expect it.
All the questions we think, even ruminate over, are the center of this poem:
Do you ever miss me? Am I just a memory? (for me...Am I even a memory?)
If yes, Is there still a chance?
But 'sometimes' is never enough to take chances on...
Comment Written 02-May-2017
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow what a way to write a song and I truly love the style you used in making us feel right there witnessing the interaction and the way each part is led up to. I also appreciate the wonderful history to the picture. I am a country western fan and never knew the correlation with the guitar.
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Wow what a way to write a song and I truly love the style you used in making us feel right there witnessing the interaction and the way each part is led up to. I also appreciate the wonderful history to the picture. I am a country western fan and never knew the correlation with the guitar.
Comment Written 02-May-2017
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Comment from Susanjohn
Don't we all look back and wish for what used to be....sigh... you summed that feeling up for sure!! loving the lyrics! enjoyed reading! :-)))))))))))
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Don't we all look back and wish for what used to be....sigh... you summed that feeling up for sure!! loving the lyrics! enjoyed reading! :-)))))))))))
Comment Written 01-May-2017
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Comment from Bill O'Bier
To write a good song, there has to be some spark from realism that communicates a real feeling. When your heart sings a song, it's incomplete until another heart whispers back. Thanks for the song.
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To write a good song, there has to be some spark from realism that communicates a real feeling. When your heart sings a song, it's incomplete until another heart whispers back. Thanks for the song.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
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Comment from XGoneX
Hi,
This is a nice song, mixed with dialogue and music in the chorus. I liked the meaning of the chorus, the message and how it rhymes and flows.
Sometimes, we can't go back in time and must live with the consequences.
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Hi,
This is a nice song, mixed with dialogue and music in the chorus. I liked the meaning of the chorus, the message and how it rhymes and flows.
Sometimes, we can't go back in time and must live with the consequences.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
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Well done x
Comment from seaglass
I know nothing about song writing but this seems to work. I can imagine it in song. It's would be a duet, I would think. Nice rhyme and movement, as well as sentiment.
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I know nothing about song writing but this seems to work. I can imagine it in song. It's would be a duet, I would think. Nice rhyme and movement, as well as sentiment.
Comment Written 01-May-2017
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Comment from Hansel1
Humans are never satisfied with what they have. Exacerbating this symptom, we often misconstrue reality when looking back to strengthen our self-fulfilled belief. Nicely constructed poem - Cheers!
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Humans are never satisfied with what they have. Exacerbating this symptom, we often misconstrue reality when looking back to strengthen our self-fulfilled belief. Nicely constructed poem - Cheers!
Comment Written 01-May-2017
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Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading these lovely lyrics of longing. Perfect for a country western theme. I think we can all relate to "sometimes" when looking back at a relationship or a decision.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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I enjoyed reading these lovely lyrics of longing. Perfect for a country western theme. I think we can all relate to "sometimes" when looking back at a relationship or a decision.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-May-2017
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Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, sometimes is the refrain, the song must have been beautiful to heart. I am not talking of the what it all means , but what it all says in mental music, it should sound great, I am sure.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Hi friend, sometimes is the refrain, the song must have been beautiful to heart. I am not talking of the what it all means , but what it all says in mental music, it should sound great, I am sure.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 07-May-2017
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics and thanks for taking the time to write a review.
