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Sometimes

Pining for what used to be

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Comment from Kerry Robinson
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Well, that was fantastic, I loved it. And who in the world don't know Willie, must live under a rock if they don't. lol. You said in your notes how some, misconstrued, Ahh, they hell with em' some people are just senseless, lol. there's not even - a have to read between the lines here. ha-crystal clarity to me, totally got, love the line breaks, I thought you did a bang up job here. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 03-May-2017


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reply by Kerry Robinson on 07-May-2017
    lol, You are very welcome
Comment from LaRosa
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Promise, I got it. :)
The structure of your lost love poem is unusual, very original, and very well done.
One can picture, feel what it would be like to run into a past love when you least expect it.
All the questions we think, even ruminate over, are the center of this poem:
Do you ever miss me? Am I just a memory? (for me...Am I even a memory?)
If yes, Is there still a chance?
But 'sometimes' is never enough to take chances on...

 Comment Written 02-May-2017


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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Wow what a way to write a song and I truly love the style you used in making us feel right there witnessing the interaction and the way each part is led up to. I also appreciate the wonderful history to the picture. I am a country western fan and never knew the correlation with the guitar.

 Comment Written 02-May-2017


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Comment from Susanjohn
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Don't we all look back and wish for what used to be....sigh... you summed that feeling up for sure!! loving the lyrics! enjoyed reading! :-)))))))))))

 Comment Written 01-May-2017


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Comment from Bill O'Bier
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To write a good song, there has to be some spark from realism that communicates a real feeling. When your heart sings a song, it's incomplete until another heart whispers back. Thanks for the song.

 Comment Written 01-May-2017


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Comment from XGoneX
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Hi,
This is a nice song, mixed with dialogue and music in the chorus. I liked the meaning of the chorus, the message and how it rhymes and flows.
Sometimes, we can't go back in time and must live with the consequences.

 Comment Written 01-May-2017


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reply by XGoneX on 07-May-2017
    Well done x
Comment from seaglass
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I know nothing about song writing but this seems to work. I can imagine it in song. It's would be a duet, I would think. Nice rhyme and movement, as well as sentiment.

 Comment Written 01-May-2017


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Comment from Hansel1
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Humans are never satisfied with what they have. Exacerbating this symptom, we often misconstrue reality when looking back to strengthen our self-fulfilled belief. Nicely constructed poem - Cheers!

 Comment Written 01-May-2017


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Comment from Janet Foor
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I enjoyed reading these lovely lyrics of longing. Perfect for a country western theme. I think we can all relate to "sometimes" when looking back at a relationship or a decision.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 01-May-2017


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Comment from Benny Beeharry
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Hi friend, sometimes is the refrain, the song must have been beautiful to heart. I am not talking of the what it all means , but what it all says in mental music, it should sound great, I am sure.

Danny Jock

 Comment Written 01-May-2017


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