Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A terrible time in history. A good write on this period that ravaged Europe. I guess this contest is supposed to be about awful things that happened in history. You certainly selected a worthy one. Marilyn

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2017

Thank you for the read and the comment.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Average

You didn't read the rules of the contest. This contest is about a catastrophic event.

You(r) haunt/ing the cham/bers of my mind =9
Be =1
Gone=1 .... good syllabic count

You need to write a new poem about a catastrophic event. If you do let me know and I will change my score.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2017

Title: Crash

Jarring crash echoing in my mind
Please
Stop

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I like this entry a lot. This is a very good use of the format which is not easy to get real meaning into, but you did it here.

Best of luck to you
GMG

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for the read and the comment.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Mind, head and heart do not act in unison, lost love echoes in memories, errors reminds, this monologue is nice, mind reminds but head and heart say something against, I liked.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017

Thanks for the read and your comments.