The Love of God
What Makes Me Happy19 total reviews
Comment from Ken McCubbin
While I appreciate your passion, it doesn't translate well through the writing quality. The quality is less than super. I would advise heightening your economy of words.
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reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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While I appreciate your passion, it doesn't translate well through the writing quality. The quality is less than super. I would advise heightening your economy of words.
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Comment Written 01-May-2017
reply by the author on 02-May-2017
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Hello Ken and Welcome to Fanstory,
Thanks so much for your review and I am glad to know that you appreciate my passion and I gladly accept the two stars for my passion.
I am sorry to hear that my writing quality in your eyes is less than SUPER. Just so you know my friend, I don't write for super. I pen totally from my heart and if what I pen touches the heart of one soul, then I am happy. Your review placed a smile on my face as I can tell you were touched by this simple and honest poem. To be honest Ken, I don't think I will be using any superfluous words to get my message across. So knowing this in advance, its ok for you to pass my work, trust me I will be just fine with it.
I am just a curious person by nature; you are new on the site and this is the first review I have received from you; how can one review determine the need for the heightening of my economy?...of words?
I can take constructive criticism very well and will do all I can to learn from it, but I will never change who I am nor will I ever allow one review to daunt my ability to write .
When you decide to pen and post, I wish you nothing but the best and much success. Blessings my friend.....Portia
Comment from Oatmeal
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Your arrangement here is very creative.
The flow was very nice. The theme was good. Your feelings are expressed well.
The artwork complemented your poem.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Your arrangement here is very creative.
The flow was very nice. The theme was good. Your feelings are expressed well.
The artwork complemented your poem.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Oatmeal,
Thank you for such an outstanding review, you review and very kind comments are greatly appreciated. Love you, my friend....Blessings
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You are very welcome.
Love you,
Camille
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are heart felt, clear and thought provoking.
The reader identified with the words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are heart felt, clear and thought provoking.
The reader identified with the words of this poem. The artwork is perfect and compliments the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Harmony13,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
What a beautiful, spiritual poem that flows wonderfully with some very uplifting lines throughout.
And what a lovely picture to accompany your words
Have a lovely evening
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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What a beautiful, spiritual poem that flows wonderfully with some very uplifting lines throughout.
And what a lovely picture to accompany your words
Have a lovely evening
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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YNWA,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....
Comment from robyn corum
What a happy and uplifting poem -- it's message is so delightfully true. *smile*. Counting your blessings in rhyme -- nice! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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What a happy and uplifting poem -- it's message is so delightfully true. *smile*. Counting your blessings in rhyme -- nice! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Robyn,
Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
Beautiful, I love the repitition, it really gave a good rythm to the flow. The imagery is pretty artistic and so pleasing infilling a feeling of hope.
A great entry to the content.
Have a nice day.
Namaskaram
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Beautiful, I love the repitition, it really gave a good rythm to the flow. The imagery is pretty artistic and so pleasing infilling a feeling of hope.
A great entry to the content.
Have a nice day.
Namaskaram
Comment Written 27-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Namaskaram,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....
Comment from sunnilicious
This is a beautiful poem. More people should find the time to cherish what is most important to them... in their hearts, lives and surroundings. You are wise. Well thought out and nicely written work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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This is a beautiful poem. More people should find the time to cherish what is most important to them... in their hearts, lives and surroundings. You are wise. Well thought out and nicely written work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Sunnilicious,
Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings......
Comment from Dean Kuch
So, basically the message you're conveying here in a nice, neat, tidy little nutshell is that the only thing in life that makes you truly happy is God.
How nice...
Good luck.
~Dean
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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So, basically the message you're conveying here in a nice, neat, tidy little nutshell is that the only thing in life that makes you truly happy is God.
How nice...
Good luck.
~Dean
Comment Written 26-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Thank you for you review and best wishes.......God Bless
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Yours is a very charming poem. It reads very easily and happily. I can feel the joy and the great faith in God that your poem exhibits. I like the presentation. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Yours is a very charming poem. It reads very easily and happily. I can feel the joy and the great faith in God that your poem exhibits. I like the presentation. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Nancy,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.......
Comment from JDRBAR
Very nicely written and most inspirational. Love the pic. Reminds me when I was young and my brother and I walked the tracks to school every day. Life was simpler then.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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Very nicely written and most inspirational. Love the pic. Reminds me when I was young and my brother and I walked the tracks to school every day. Life was simpler then.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2017
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I remember those days as well; thank you for your review and very kind comment they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
