Nature and Music
Moonlight Serenade20 total reviews
Comment from estory
A nice traditional haiku, with a very musical feel to it, and a great image. Music calms the savage beast. Simple and clean, with that epiphany moment estory
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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A nice traditional haiku, with a very musical feel to it, and a great image. Music calms the savage beast. Simple and clean, with that epiphany moment estory
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments. Blessings..
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This reminds me of a time when I saw an amazing violinist on a cruise ship crossing the Atlantic, I was taken to another place, just like your wonderful words, waves of frustration taken out on an instrument of strings and producing a serenade! Good luck with the competition, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This reminds me of a time when I saw an amazing violinist on a cruise ship crossing the Atlantic, I was taken to another place, just like your wonderful words, waves of frustration taken out on an instrument of strings and producing a serenade! Good luck with the competition, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes....Blessings
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written moonlight 5-7-5 poem. A violinist plays the violin within the rhythm of the waves, while the moon is rising. A beautiful moonlight serenade.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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A very well-written moonlight 5-7-5 poem. A violinist plays the violin within the rhythm of the waves, while the moon is rising. A beautiful moonlight serenade.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments. Blessings
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry in the Sunlight or Moonlight contest. This piece has a presentation that greatly enhances the beautiful words. Good luck in the contest with this wonderful poem filled with imagery,
~patty~
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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thank you for sharing your entry in the Sunlight or Moonlight contest. This piece has a presentation that greatly enhances the beautiful words. Good luck in the contest with this wonderful poem filled with imagery,
~patty~
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for such an outstanding review, your very kind comments and best wishes are greatly appreciated. Blessings
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a nice tribute to moonlight; well said, this refers to a musical performance given to give honour moonlight, as violinist plays and calms waves of frustration; I enjoyed the emotion and visual imagery.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This is a nice tribute to moonlight; well said, this refers to a musical performance given to give honour moonlight, as violinist plays and calms waves of frustration; I enjoyed the emotion and visual imagery.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated....Blessings
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a very nice piece, evoking strong and vivid imagery. It's all about the feeling in this one. Syllables all present and correct. Excellent metaphor maintained.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Hi there,
This is a very nice piece, evoking strong and vivid imagery. It's all about the feeling in this one. Syllables all present and correct. Excellent metaphor maintained.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for such an outstanding review, your very kind comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
Comment from Dean Kuch
Violin music, when played by the hands of a skilled musician and violinist, can have that effect on us.
This is a lovely 5/7/5 poem both in wording and presentation.
Best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Violin music, when played by the hands of a skilled musician and violinist, can have that effect on us.
This is a lovely 5/7/5 poem both in wording and presentation.
Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for such a kind review. Blessings
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You're welcome. :)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very beautiful Haiku, the picture is exquisite my friend. It is pared so lovely
I wish you the best, !Kerry!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This is a very beautiful Haiku, the picture is exquisite my friend. It is pared so lovely
I wish you the best, !Kerry!
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for such an outstanding review, your very kind comments and best wishes are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
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You are very welcome my dear
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed your 5-7-5 poem " Nature and Music" . All your lines and syllables were correct and you chose a most beautiful picture for the Moonlight Serenade.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed your 5-7-5 poem " Nature and Music" . All your lines and syllables were correct and you chose a most beautiful picture for the Moonlight Serenade.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
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You ar most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
This display and choice of words is extraordinary. However, I don't have six stars at this time. I wish I did because it is worthy of the six. I am in love with the whole lay out. It is magnificent.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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This display and choice of words is extraordinary. However, I don't have six stars at this time. I wish I did because it is worthy of the six. I am in love with the whole lay out. It is magnificent.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Tier,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, your very kind comments are greatly appreciated and put a smile on my face. Blessings......................
