Nature and Music
Moonlight Serenade20 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Ah, this is a lovely 5-7-5 poem
I can picture the violinist playing in the moonlight
or perhaps even calling to the moonlight
Beautiful notes to calm and sooth
Perfect match of poem to art work
Very nicely done
RS
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Ah, this is a lovely 5-7-5 poem
I can picture the violinist playing in the moonlight
or perhaps even calling to the moonlight
Beautiful notes to calm and sooth
Perfect match of poem to art work
Very nicely done
RS
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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RS,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comment they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....Portia
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like the image very much.
-Syllable count is good.
-Imagery is good; we can
see and hear the violinist play
to calm any frustrations.
-Good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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-I like the image very much.
-Syllable count is good.
-Imagery is good; we can
see and hear the violinist play
to calm any frustrations.
-Good satori line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Pam,
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings.....Portia
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You are very welcome, Portia.
Comment from wondertwin
Love the Moonlight Serenade... symphony of sounds through the writing of your words! Perfect illustration to accompany your poem! Blessings, AJ
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Love the Moonlight Serenade... symphony of sounds through the writing of your words! Perfect illustration to accompany your poem! Blessings, AJ
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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AJ,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, very kind comments and a six star rating, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....
Comment from Thomas Bowling
For some reason the first time I picked up a violin I was able to play it. My friends were amazed. One of the women said she had taken lessons for years and couldn't play that well.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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For some reason the first time I picked up a violin I was able to play it. My friends were amazed. One of the women said she had taken lessons for years and couldn't play that well.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Tom,
That is amazing to be able to just pick up the violin and start playing. Two of my grandsons play the Cello and the other one plays the Viola. As for me, I am the singer. Thank you for your review, greatly appreciated. Blessings...
Comment from Pantygynt
I believe this fits the requirement set very clever, both moonlight and waves are natural objects and only in our human nature can we experience frustration. One can almost hear the noes she coaxes from her instrument in th beautiful artwork you have chosen to accompany this.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I believe this fits the requirement set very clever, both moonlight and waves are natural objects and only in our human nature can we experience frustration. One can almost hear the noes she coaxes from her instrument in th beautiful artwork you have chosen to accompany this.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Pantygynt,
Thank you for your review and very kind comments...Blessings
Comment from JDRBAR
Wonderful imagery. As a musician, I can relate with the emotion the image and words evoke. You have captured it all very well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Wonderful imagery. As a musician, I can relate with the emotion the image and words evoke. You have captured it all very well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
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You're more than welcome.
Comment from LisaD123
This is beautifully written and presented. The words paint an interesting and vivid picture in the reader's mind. The third line is a perfect contrast. Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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This is beautifully written and presented. The words paint an interesting and vivid picture in the reader's mind. The third line is a perfect contrast. Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Wow! Thank you for such an outstanding review, very kind comments, six star rating and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings....
Comment from sunao
Wow! Amazing picture that you chose to use with the poem. I really need to practice my violin. I play the piano and music evokes brilliance in us because it helps us form our self-image and rediscover our true potential. It also allays our anger and helps us to control our emotions when needed. Thank you so much for writing this poem! It is truly beautiful. Have a gorgeous day!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Wow! Amazing picture that you chose to use with the poem. I really need to practice my violin. I play the piano and music evokes brilliance in us because it helps us form our self-image and rediscover our true potential. It also allays our anger and helps us to control our emotions when needed. Thank you so much for writing this poem! It is truly beautiful. Have a gorgeous day!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much for such an outstanding review. Your very kind comments are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Nature and Music' is a lovely poem.
Outstanding artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Moonlight.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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'Nature and Music' is a lovely poem.
Outstanding artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Moonlight.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for such an outstanding review, your very kind comments and best wishes are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
Comment from Irish Rain
Oh my, what a pretty image. Even without this beautiful image, your words paint it. A most lovely entry here, good luck to you, blessings...
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Oh my, what a pretty image. Even without this beautiful image, your words paint it. A most lovely entry here, good luck to you, blessings...
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for such an outstanding review, your very kind comments and best wishes are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
