Cascade
Moonlight falling on icy branches5 total reviews
Comment from LaRosa
Congratulations!
I've been sick and never saw your moonlighting cascade til this morning.
It's great. I can actually hear the heavy laden crystal branches singing!
Good work for sure, you deserved the win!
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Congratulations!
I've been sick and never saw your moonlighting cascade til this morning.
It's great. I can actually hear the heavy laden crystal branches singing!
Good work for sure, you deserved the win!
Comment Written 23-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the read, the comment and the rating.
Comment from writer723
I selected and voted for your haiku because it had a lot of imagery within it. I could feel the icy cocoon on the branches and hear the tinkling music. It was beautifully written. It painted a picture in my mind and set the scene well. Best wishes in the contest! God bless!
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I selected and voted for your haiku because it had a lot of imagery within it. I could feel the icy cocoon on the branches and hear the tinkling music. It was beautifully written. It painted a picture in my mind and set the scene well. Best wishes in the contest! God bless!
Comment Written 22-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your vote and your read. Very much appreciated.
Comment from suep
You paint a beautiful picture with your words. I enjoyed 'playing tingling songs' ... I love the sound ice laden branches make. Great picture and presentation. Best wishes in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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You paint a beautiful picture with your words. I enjoyed 'playing tingling songs' ... I love the sound ice laden branches make. Great picture and presentation. Best wishes in the contest. :)
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing your entry in the Sunlight or Moonlight contest. Your portrayal of moonlight cascading over the ice seen out your window was very vivid. You met all of the requirements of the 5-7-5 poetic form, and gave us a story within the lines. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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thank you for sharing your entry in the Sunlight or Moonlight contest. Your portrayal of moonlight cascading over the ice seen out your window was very vivid. You met all of the requirements of the 5-7-5 poetic form, and gave us a story within the lines. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Cascade' is a very good poem.
It consists of three lines.
Each line has a syllable count: 5-7-5
Great artwork: The image shown is a good match for this poem. The background and font color goes well with the image.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Moonlight.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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'Cascade' is a very good poem.
It consists of three lines.
Each line has a syllable count: 5-7-5
Great artwork: The image shown is a good match for this poem. The background and font color goes well with the image.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Moonlight.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much for the read and the comments.
