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An outlaw terrorizes Boot Hill.29 total reviews
Comment from Craigitar
Good one! Love the humor. Great buildup to nothing. Loved the calling-out and the showdown being pushed back by naps and medications until it was forgotten by both parties. Good writin'!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Good one! Love the humor. Great buildup to nothing. Loved the calling-out and the showdown being pushed back by naps and medications until it was forgotten by both parties. Good writin'!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
It was a line Elmer heard in a Brando movie. He thought it lent dramatic flair. He had used it on his wife once. . . only once. It was three days before he could open his left eye again. -
ha ha - I love this kind of humour - just shows what sort of person I am - cringe.....
I think this - in my humble opinion - is you at your best, Thomas - your sense humour shines through. We could do with a few more laughs on site.
Margaret
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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It was a line Elmer heard in a Brando movie. He thought it lent dramatic flair. He had used it on his wife once. . . only once. It was three days before he could open his left eye again. -
ha ha - I love this kind of humour - just shows what sort of person I am - cringe.....
I think this - in my humble opinion - is you at your best, Thomas - your sense humour shines through. We could do with a few more laughs on site.
Margaret
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Hombre fer readin' my yarn.
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Thomas,
Suspense-mounting fiction of an outlaw who is elderly and about to meet someone who is going to end his terrorizing. I thought the end was so funny, they both forgot that they were going to meet each other to "have it out." Good writing. Dove
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Dear Thomas,
Suspense-mounting fiction of an outlaw who is elderly and about to meet someone who is going to end his terrorizing. I thought the end was so funny, they both forgot that they were going to meet each other to "have it out." Good writing. Dove
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Hombre fer readin' my yarn.
Comment from aryr
This was so so very cute. I loved the characters and the descriptions of them. It was great to have ones feeble mind addressed. We all get older and we all forget and yet we always tend to remember that there was something we forgot. Great job, thanks.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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This was so so very cute. I loved the characters and the descriptions of them. It was great to have ones feeble mind addressed. We all get older and we all forget and yet we always tend to remember that there was something we forgot. Great job, thanks.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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What? I can't hear very well anymore. Thanks for reading.
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welcome
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Thomas
As I've stateds before you have an unique sense of humor. I guess when you have two old farts pushing into their twilight years it's to be expected. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Good morning, Thomas
As I've stateds before you have an unique sense of humor. I guess when you have two old farts pushing into their twilight years it's to be expected. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Hombre. I'm mighty glad you took a shine to my yarn.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Like the sprang into action. Actually, he shuffled to the table - easy to visualize this scene. Very funny read this one, great dialogue and love the ending. You do these humourous writes very well.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Like the sprang into action. Actually, he shuffled to the table - easy to visualize this scene. Very funny read this one, great dialogue and love the ending. You do these humourous writes very well.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Hombre. I'm mighty glad you took a shine to my yarn.
Comment from Sankey
haha funny. Good work. I get 'Old Timers' all the time now. Only 66 so I dunno how I will be in twenty more years. probably dead. Thanks Chapter has been fixed if you are interested.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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haha funny. Good work. I get 'Old Timers' all the time now. Only 66 so I dunno how I will be in twenty more years. probably dead. Thanks Chapter has been fixed if you are interested.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Hombre. I'm mighty glad you took a shine to my yarn.
Comment from CD Richards
Love it. Such a crushing blow he almost broke Elmer's glasses. This is seriously funny. The really sad thing is, if I picture myself having an altercation, it goes pretty much the way you've described it here. Nice job. Craig
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Love it. Such a crushing blow he almost broke Elmer's glasses. This is seriously funny. The really sad thing is, if I picture myself having an altercation, it goes pretty much the way you've described it here. Nice job. Craig
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading. Glad I could tickle your funny bone.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I hate to admit it, but sometimes I resemble those remarks. Memory just ain't what it used to be. Sort of like last week when I took a walk up the street, stopped to take a pee on the stop sign at the corner. Then, got locked up for insufficient exposure. Thanks for sharing another fun read. :-)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I hate to admit it, but sometimes I resemble those remarks. Memory just ain't what it used to be. Sort of like last week when I took a walk up the street, stopped to take a pee on the stop sign at the corner. Then, got locked up for insufficient exposure. Thanks for sharing another fun read. :-)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank ya kindly Hombre. Glad you liked the yarn I spun fer ya.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
when Bud walked around(,)
Loved it, loved it, especially the end when they forgot. Perfectly told and interreaction was great, even when they had to be helped up or shuffled along. Very cute
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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when Bud walked around(,)
Loved it, loved it, especially the end when they forgot. Perfectly told and interreaction was great, even when they had to be helped up or shuffled along. Very cute
Comment Written 17-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thanks, Hombre. Glad you liked yer yarn. Might appreciative of the hep.
