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Comment from frogbook
Great imagery in this short poem and a wealth of humor and vision in this excellent picture. A worthy and entertaining little gem that should be a winner in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Great imagery in this short poem and a wealth of humor and vision in this excellent picture. A worthy and entertaining little gem that should be a winner in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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I?ve should give up on those! Thanks,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kiwijenny
And drinker ...feed that voracious eater...good thing it's ok to eat imaginary food...so it's not expensive to feed but is expansive ...well penned poem..
Good luck with the prompt
God bless
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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And drinker ...feed that voracious eater...good thing it's ok to eat imaginary food...so it's not expensive to feed but is expansive ...well penned poem..
Good luck with the prompt
God bless
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2018
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LOL! Jenny, I?ve packed on countless pounds, but it?s all brain food! Cheers! Thanks for your cute review,
Hugs and God Bless
Trisha
Comment from poetwatch
You have dined on the written word with a voracious appetite and have left few scrapes for the others. This is very good. it is an excellent entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing a meal with me.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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You have dined on the written word with a voracious appetite and have left few scrapes for the others. This is very good. it is an excellent entry for the Writer's Block 5-7-5. Thank you for sharing a meal with me.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2018
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Your welcome! I believe you meant ?scraps?? Yes a few measly morsels are left for you LOL
Thank you
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from donette1914
wow, this is so creative and so brilliant!
I really like the artwork. chosen very well
I like the words you used
I hope for the best in the contest
very well penned
it was a pleasure donette1914 sep 23, 2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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wow, this is so creative and so brilliant!
I really like the artwork. chosen very well
I like the words you used
I hope for the best in the contest
very well penned
it was a pleasure donette1914 sep 23, 2018
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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You?re very kind Donette , thank you so much for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is just too cute. I smiled after reading it. Most poets/writers can relate to this poem. We all have our dry spells as our muses take vacation. Perhaps entering the writing prompts or contests might help. When I want to write, I usually visit a nature scenery. I am inspired by nature.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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This is just too cute. I smiled after reading it. Most poets/writers can relate to this poem. We all have our dry spells as our muses take vacation. Perhaps entering the writing prompts or contests might help. When I want to write, I usually visit a nature scenery. I am inspired by nature.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Thanks for your suggestion and empathy! I love nature as well, especially birds, and butterflies. I appreciate your review an those stars,
.Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL oh this is so funny and so true. i can picture one sitting and acting nervous, waiting on the muse to take over. Loved the idea of chewing Tums.lol
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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LOL oh this is so funny and so true. i can picture one sitting and acting nervous, waiting on the muse to take over. Loved the idea of chewing Tums.lol
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thanks Barb but my humor got me nowhere against real talent! I appreciate your comment ,and I'm glad it was fun to read
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Dont say that, this has talent written it it, just run with it and enjoy what you do, it will shine through
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Thanks for your emotional support
Comment from Janet Foor
I think, nothing comes
I'll just sit here chewing Tums
and twiddle my thumbs
Been there - done that. A great description of writers block in a haiku.
Well done.
Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Janet
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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I think, nothing comes
I'll just sit here chewing Tums
and twiddle my thumbs
Been there - done that. A great description of writers block in a haiku.
Well done.
Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Janet
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Thank you very much, Janet
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a good Haiku.
It consists of three lines.
Each lines has a syllable count: 5-7-5
Total syllable count: 17
It has humor.
It rhymes.
Great artwork: The image is good match for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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This is a good Haiku.
It consists of three lines.
Each lines has a syllable count: 5-7-5
Total syllable count: 17
It has humor.
It rhymes.
Great artwork: The image is good match for this poem.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Nikki, I really appreciate your very positive review, and stars.
Comment from bhogg
Well, made me smile. Writers block is very real. I used to think that all I had to do was to sit down and start writing. Oh, if it just that simple.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Well, made me smile. Writers block is very real. I used to think that all I had to do was to sit down and start writing. Oh, if it just that simple.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2017
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Me too! I was nervous the first time, but ended up writing about writers' block LOL. I'm grateful for your review and rating.