The Odd Couple
Eight-Syllable Poem Comprising Three Rhyming Lines16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A very unlikely friendship, but it takes all sorts I suppose, I love the two words, Rat and Chat, very unique, and the middle like keeping the rhyme is clever, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
A very unlikely friendship, but it takes all sorts I suppose, I love the two words, Rat and Chat, very unique, and the middle like keeping the rhyme is clever, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Thank you, Dolly, for the terrific review! - Don (aka Ogden)
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Good job! You nailed this 1-6-1 in just three lines.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem. Both the cat and rat is fat.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
Good job! You nailed this 1-6-1 in just three lines.
Great artwork: The image shown is a perfect fit for this poem. Both the cat and rat is fat.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the compliments and your good wishes, Nikki.
Don
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing this Rhyme 1-6-1. The presentation and poem compliment one another, and there is a charming tale within the lines. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
Thank you for sharing this Rhyme 1-6-1. The presentation and poem compliment one another, and there is a charming tale within the lines. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your approval, Mustangpatty..
Comment from marybell1
That lovely photo "The odd couple" sure attracted my attention. They look a happy couple to me. All your lines and syllables were correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
That lovely photo "The odd couple" sure attracted my attention. They look a happy couple to me. All your lines and syllables were correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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Thanks for your excellent review, and good wishes, Marybell. "The Odd Couple" was a fun piece to write..
Don
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
You have the correct amount of syllables and the presentation is nice. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a good chance of winning.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Hello,
You have the correct amount of syllables and the presentation is nice. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a good chance of winning.
Gypsy
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks your encouraging comments and good wishes, Gypsy.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
So cute ... so fun! This is a terrific entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 contest. It makes perfect sense. :) Great title "The Odd Couple". Terrific choice of picture too ... just adorable! Good luck in the contest! -- Connie
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
So cute ... so fun! This is a terrific entry for the Rhyme That 1-6-1 contest. It makes perfect sense. :) Great title "The Odd Couple". Terrific choice of picture too ... just adorable! Good luck in the contest! -- Connie
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you for telling me how much you enjoyed "The Odd Couple," Bichonfrisegirl. It's very rewarding to hear. - Don (aka Ogden)
Comment from suep
Wow! Seven of the eight syllables all rhyme. That's amazing. And it makes sense, too. Great title and perfect picture choice. Wonderful job with this entry. Best wishes in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Wow! Seven of the eight syllables all rhyme. That's amazing. And it makes sense, too. Great title and perfect picture choice. Wonderful job with this entry. Best wishes in the contest! :)
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you, Sue. It's very rewarding to hear that you enjoyed "The Odd Couple" so much. - Don (aka Ogden)
Comment from BeasPeas
An adorable image, the cat and the rat, in this cute 1-6-1. Lots of rhyming in so short a piece that brings a smile. I wish you much luck in the contest. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
An adorable image, the cat and the rat, in this cute 1-6-1. Lots of rhyming in so short a piece that brings a smile. I wish you much luck in the contest. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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I thought you'd appreciate that one, Marilyn. Thanks for gushing. Don
Comment from Irish Rain
Well, my goodness!! How cute is this? Great rhyme, and funny!! I can't believe that cat is sitting still for this, ha ha....good luck, blessings...
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
Well, my goodness!! How cute is this? Great rhyme, and funny!! I can't believe that cat is sitting still for this, ha ha....good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thanks for saying how much you liked "the Odd Couple," Irish. It's very rewarding to hear, especially from so talented a poet!
Don
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You're most welcome, what a nice compliment, thank you!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. The cat and the rat is enemies all these years put down their arms and decided to have a friendly chat with each other instead of running away and chasing each other.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. The cat and the rat is enemies all these years put down their arms and decided to have a friendly chat with each other instead of running away and chasing each other.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017
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Thank you Sandra, for recognizing the significance of the moment of detente between the species. - Don