Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, a lovely haunting reverie of love won and lost - the sadness that follows and the plaintive desire to be alone with one's thoughts to the comfort of cleansing ocean - beautifully constructed and fluid in its lyric presentation, with the perfect image...

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for the read and the comments.

reply by evesayshi on 12-Apr-2017

You are very welcome...

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

It seem s this love affair is one-sided. You set us up with some beautiful imagery which you paint vividly with the orange sun and pewter sky and all the lovely trappings of the seashore such as gulls and sand. Then the harsh reality of the break up and the inability to forget.
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Thanks for your read and your comment.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Sometimes when we love someone so much, even after the relationship has ended we just simply can't seem to get them out of our head.
We see their face everywhere we go, we long for them to be with us in everything we do.
Sadly, that can't always be the case.
Best wishes to you in the Love Bites poetry prompt.
~Dean

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

You got that right. Thanks for the read and the comments.

reply by Dean Kuch on 12-Apr-2017

My pleasure. :)

Comment from whizpurr ^-^

Excellent

Hi there, I enjoyed your appealing poem. It is filled with vivid colorful descriptions, emotions, and romantic energy. Great job of expressing your sentiments. The last sentence aptly summed it up. Thanks for sharing. Warm regards, Aggie

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

Thank you for the read and the comments.