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Undivided

Two hearts, one soul

2 total reviews 
Comment from rspoet
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The is a fine entry for the contest of six words
Divided by the oceans, but not by spirit or soul
Good use of sound with the many "o" sounds
Excellent picture to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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'Undivided'- the title is unique.
This poem is good.
It has 6 words which follows the guidelines.
The image is great. It fits the poem perfectly.
Thanks for sharing this.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your review.