stargazer
a six word poem3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-word poem, Stargazer, has the representative words and a sense of finality as the suggestion is that these may be at my funeral. Maybe they put the FUN in it.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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This six-word poem, Stargazer, has the representative words and a sense of finality as the suggestion is that these may be at my funeral. Maybe they put the FUN in it.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Very late reply haha but thanks for the review. I look forward to catching up with everyone at fanstory. Cheers, j
Comment from Teresa Williams
Those flowers are some of the more beautiful than most. Who, I tend to ask, are you speaking with while you intimate your statement, "your final bouquet"? Was there a death? Or does that line signify the end of a relationship?
Thank you for sharing, and especially for posting that lovely picture, which compliments your brief work. BE blessed! --Teresa Williams
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Those flowers are some of the more beautiful than most. Who, I tend to ask, are you speaking with while you intimate your statement, "your final bouquet"? Was there a death? Or does that line signify the end of a relationship?
Thank you for sharing, and especially for posting that lovely picture, which compliments your brief work. BE blessed! --Teresa Williams
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the review. I was thinking of the final bouquet at one's funeral. Oh, for a few more words, ha ha. Cheers, j
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Wow. Even more provocative! Good perspective.
Thanks for posting! --Teresa Williams
Comment from MaggieF
Your chosen picture is beautiful, the petals resemble stars. Are lillies flowers of death? The last lines is puzzling. 'Your final bouquet' is that positive? It's an amazing bouquet, bright and bold and colourful reflecting the life enjoyed? Maybe its nothing to do with physical death. Made me think. MaggieF
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Your chosen picture is beautiful, the petals resemble stars. Are lillies flowers of death? The last lines is puzzling. 'Your final bouquet' is that positive? It's an amazing bouquet, bright and bold and colourful reflecting the life enjoyed? Maybe its nothing to do with physical death. Made me think. MaggieF
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the review, yes I was thinking the final bouquet at a funeral. Oh, for a few more words, ha ha. Cheers, j
