Baby Bunny Is All Grown Up
a children's poem - girl power!22 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thanks for catching the Easter spirit and sharing it with us this charming poem about the relationship between mother and daughter. I enjoyed your speaking in the first person for more immediacy and your alternating rhymes. Happy "jelly beans"! -Joan
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Thanks for catching the Easter spirit and sharing it with us this charming poem about the relationship between mother and daughter. I enjoyed your speaking in the first person for more immediacy and your alternating rhymes. Happy "jelly beans"! -Joan
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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*grin* - Happy jelly beans to you, too, my friend! (Are jelly beans fattening? LOL)
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'Fraid so! More grins- J
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Shucks! (lol)
Comment from Poetic Friend
Ah, Dawn, I just love this poem! Any child or adult would enjoy this poem, especially around Easter. I smiled ear to ear as I read it.
As usual, your poem was written in perfect rhyme meter. Not one rhyme was forced.
Happy Easter, Dawn!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Ah, Dawn, I just love this poem! Any child or adult would enjoy this poem, especially around Easter. I smiled ear to ear as I read it.
As usual, your poem was written in perfect rhyme meter. Not one rhyme was forced.
Happy Easter, Dawn!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Happy Easter to you, too. Thank you for this wonderfully encouraging and generous review, my friend! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem. :)
Comment from frogbook
This is just darling. A wonderful children's poem well suited to their entertainment as well as their disposition as, unlike us, They WANT to be older!! Ha. Excellent and I adore the picture.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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This is just darling. A wonderful children's poem well suited to their entertainment as well as their disposition as, unlike us, They WANT to be older!! Ha. Excellent and I adore the picture.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Thanks very much, my friend. I'm so glad you thought it well-suited to a child. *smile* (Yes, I did want to be 'all grown up', and I bet you did too. Silly us! LOL)
Comment from Albert Ross
Hello my little bunny rabbit! Simply love this fluffy ditty of fun and, if I could, I would surely give you a six, as would Brian who sends his love and hops you are well. Au revoir, Albert.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Hello my little bunny rabbit! Simply love this fluffy ditty of fun and, if I could, I would surely give you a six, as would Brian who sends his love and hops you are well. Au revoir, Albert.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Love back to you both, and welcome to FanStory! Thank you for your generous and kind review. :)) XXDawn
Comment from robyn corum
Dawn,
What a sweet and fun poem for kids of allll ages! I could just see a wee bunny trying to grow up faster than her mommy wanted her to - just like in real life, of course. Guess that happens in every species. HAHA! Thanks!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Dawn,
What a sweet and fun poem for kids of allll ages! I could just see a wee bunny trying to grow up faster than her mommy wanted her to - just like in real life, of course. Guess that happens in every species. HAHA! Thanks!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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LOL. Hi, lovely Robyn! Thank you so much. :)
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Dawn,
This is a cute Easter poem written from the child's point of view. The idea of a bunny suit and the child being the Easter bunny is quite cute, especially the bit about hiding the jellybeans. Eggs are small enough, but jellybeans, oh my! lol
Thanks for sharing and Happy Easter!
Kim
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Hi Dawn,
This is a cute Easter poem written from the child's point of view. The idea of a bunny suit and the child being the Easter bunny is quite cute, especially the bit about hiding the jellybeans. Eggs are small enough, but jellybeans, oh my! lol
Thanks for sharing and Happy Easter!
Kim
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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I know, right? But a bunny's eyesight is so keen! (LOL) (It's all those carrots.)
Thanks, much, my friend. Hopping right over...
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Aww! How cute.
My grandchildren would love this one. Five are girls and have donned bunny
suits may times.
The tale is quite endearing and the language and concept are age appropriate.
A refreshing sweet poem .
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Aww! How cute.
My grandchildren would love this one. Five are girls and have donned bunny
suits may times.
The tale is quite endearing and the language and concept are age appropriate.
A refreshing sweet poem .
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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Aww! Shirley, kids are so precious when they're all excited, aren't they? I can 'see' those little girls in their bunny suits, cheeks flushed, eyes all aglow! Thank you so much for this wonderfully generous and encouraging review, my friend. I'm delighted you liked it so much!!!
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'Baby Bunny Is All Grown Up'- the title got my attention, but not as much as the poem did.
This is a very nice poem you've penned.
It's a GREAT READ for children.
The image is cute and shows a little humor.
The videos are FANTASTIC! They are great for children, especially since Easter is right around the corner.
Thanks for sharing your ADORABLE poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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'Baby Bunny Is All Grown Up'- the title got my attention, but not as much as the poem did.
This is a very nice poem you've penned.
It's a GREAT READ for children.
The image is cute and shows a little humor.
The videos are FANTASTIC! They are great for children, especially since Easter is right around the corner.
Thanks for sharing your ADORABLE poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Wow, Nikki-Nicole, thank you. What a splendid endorsement for this poem - much appreciated!
Comment from doggymad
Dawn this was just so cute and a perfect work for Easter. The entire family are all involved in making a really fun day for our bunny friend.
Aw poor mommy bunny sad to see her little one getting all grown up
hugs
Freda
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Dawn this was just so cute and a perfect work for Easter. The entire family are all involved in making a really fun day for our bunny friend.
Aw poor mommy bunny sad to see her little one getting all grown up
hugs
Freda
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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LOL. Awwwww. Thanks, Freda - so pleased you liked it. I just LOVE your comments. :))
Comment from sandy montgomery
So cute. This has a great bounce to it. Loved the story. A wonderful presentation. Cute photos. Nice flowing poetry
Thank you for sharing your work. Nice job.
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So cute. This has a great bounce to it. Loved the story. A wonderful presentation. Cute photos. Nice flowing poetry
Thank you for sharing your work. Nice job.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
