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Vote For The Future

Something Has To Change!

10 total reviews 
Comment from seaglass
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I couldn't agree more. I'm 70 years old and my fight began in the 60s. It seems we made gains slowly over time to only slide back. I will keep voting, I will persist and resist.

 Comment Written 15-May-2017

Comment from Ronni
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This is indeed what voting...for the right things, the right way....and for
the right reasons....with the right kind of leadership and example is all
about. Most surely your vote is like I and most would unhesitatingly
cast. Yet, as you note, and we are all still so aware, of all that still
exists to the contrary; we remain in continual jeopardy and a yet
not too unforeseeable doom. A direly needed reminder and obvious
peril shared in your vote message here. Thank you for sharing it here.
Gratefully, best wishes always, Ronni

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017

Comment from w.j.debi
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These are all good things to vote for. Now getting someone to recognize the vote and carry out our intensions it the trick. Good job getting the challenge out there. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thank you for reading my entry. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from lyenochka
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Agreed. But perhaps the way to vote with you isn't through government election at all but in a grass roots effort where everyone would take the risks of being kind and loving to their neighbors.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Perhaps. Thank you for reading my entry. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Thank you for sharing your contest entry with us. Your words echo the sentiments of many people who are sitting there and scratch their heads as every single campaign promise has been ignored or broken,
~patty~

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thanks for reading. I appreciate your comments. There are a lot of people scratching their heads., LOL.
Comment from Sis Cat
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Yes, the future is in our hands. I, too, was disappointed by the outcome of the last election. This part of your get out and vote essay resonated with me:

I voted to end man's inhumanity to man, world hunger, sexual harassment, and for people to respect the differences of others.

So far, my vote was ignored.

You end your piece with firm encouragement:

Please cast your vote to preserve peace, knowledge and the human initiative. The future is in our hands!

Thank you for sharing and caring.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read my story. Regards.
Comment from emptypage
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Well-written. I agree completely with your assessment, too, though I know that isn't supposed to factor in to a review.

I am happy when I see protests. I've been an activist all my life and begged, BEGGED my family to join me. Now I am too sick, but they are all out there. Protecting the rights of my sister and niece, protecting the sanctity of the marriage of my brother and his husband, trying to turn the world around before we start a world war or get nuked.

Very thought-provoking post, as I guess you see, LOL.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thank you so much for your passionate review. I believe in protecting people's rights, especially those that can't protect themselves.
reply by emptypage on 08-Apr-2017
    Feel free to nominate me as reviewer of the month, LOL.
Comment from mmonaghan777
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Well written, well said. You put everything into words that remind us of our frustrations of everyday life. Our vote does count. It's in the Lord's hands not ours.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your insightful comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read my entry.
Comment from Thor R
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I read this as a diatribe which wasn't appealing. I thought that it might be a parody of a poster or advertisement, but it didn't seem to be. You have 500 words, so I'd encourage you to use it more to flesh out your message. Talk about specifics, compare and contrast your view to those you're 'voting' against.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017

Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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The title, 'Vote For the Future', grabs the reader's attention.
Nice art image.
This is a GOOD READ!
Thank you for sharing it with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2017
    Thank you for your comments. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my entry.