Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Missing My Stop"A collection of sonnets
4 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
Now this does sound like you, autobiogrsphical I am guessing. At least that`s what she told me, naughty bot. Great fun and easy to read, so I am guessing perfect form and all that. Loved it. NG
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Now this does sound like you, autobiogrsphical I am guessing. At least that`s what she told me, naughty bot. Great fun and easy to read, so I am guessing perfect form and all that. Loved it. NG
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fabulous sonnet, Mav. Your meter excellent, rhymes perfection and most all a little naughty, which is how I like my sonnets. Pinocchio. So that's what it's called now.
Exceptional poetry. I wish you all the best in the contest. This is a winner in my view.
Ange
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This is a fabulous sonnet, Mav. Your meter excellent, rhymes perfection and most all a little naughty, which is how I like my sonnets. Pinocchio. So that's what it's called now.
Exceptional poetry. I wish you all the best in the contest. This is a winner in my view.
Ange
Comment Written 08-Apr-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a good poem.
It rhymes; has humor.
The title, 'Missing My Stop' is a wonderful choice.- It goes well with the image and poem.
Great artwork.- The portrait of the lady in the red dress is a perfect fit for the poem.
I also like your background and color of words.
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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This is a good poem.
It rhymes; has humor.
The title, 'Missing My Stop' is a wonderful choice.- It goes well with the image and poem.
Great artwork.- The portrait of the lady in the red dress is a perfect fit for the poem.
I also like your background and color of words.
Thanks for sharing it.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
Comment from w.j.debi
LOL. Oh, the restrictions of form. So I guess the rest of the tale is just left to the reader's imagination because you have reached the limit of lines for the sonnet. Best of luck with this one.
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LOL. Oh, the restrictions of form. So I guess the rest of the tale is just left to the reader's imagination because you have reached the limit of lines for the sonnet. Best of luck with this one.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
