When Calls The Heart
a free verse when the heart calls26 total reviews
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is a lovely poem.
Nice title,- 'When Calls the Heart'- It's a perfect fit for the title and poem.
Two thumbs up!!
Magnificent artwork.- Very Beautiful portrait!
I love the image of couple in each other's arms with butterflies in the background.- A big heart drawn over the two.
I had a short story published in 10th grade, "From the Heart".
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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This is a lovely poem.
Nice title,- 'When Calls the Heart'- It's a perfect fit for the title and poem.
Two thumbs up!!
Magnificent artwork.- Very Beautiful portrait!
I love the image of couple in each other's arms with butterflies in the background.- A big heart drawn over the two.
I had a short story published in 10th grade, "From the Heart".
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Nicole thank you for your most excellent review your excellent comments. I truly appreciate them. Take care my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from judsmith
Thank you for sharing your feelings on love and the heart. Only one thing hung me up. The line, "has nights making it is hard to sleep", perhaps "is" isn't necessary. I won't pretend I understand any hidden meaning that might be there; however, it was clear you have felt some or all of these emotions for another person in your life. Good job in trying to put those feelings into words. Respectfully, Jud Smith
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you for sharing your feelings on love and the heart. Only one thing hung me up. The line, "has nights making it is hard to sleep", perhaps "is" isn't necessary. I won't pretend I understand any hidden meaning that might be there; however, it was clear you have felt some or all of these emotions for another person in your life. Good job in trying to put those feelings into words. Respectfully, Jud Smith
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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I missed removing the word is. Good catch and thank you for your review,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Ric Myworld
Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems that give us a glimpse into the heart of a warm, kind hearted person who knows what love is all about. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems that give us a glimpse into the heart of a warm, kind hearted person who knows what love is all about. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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You know Ric, I can always count on you for your excellent reviews and comments. Just like this review and comments for which I thank you my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent love poem. You should have entered this in the love poem contest currently going on. I think there is no entry fee and a cash prize. This would have been a sure contender.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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An excellent love poem. You should have entered this in the love poem contest currently going on. I think there is no entry fee and a cash prize. This would have been a sure contender.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thomas, thanks for this great review and comments. One thing I never do anymore is enter contests. I have entered with poems that are awarded sixes and can't even Garner an honorable mention. I don't need to waste my time! Take care my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from mbroyles2
So many wonderful descriptions of love that come from the heart.
You captured all the emotions well.
"When calls the heart, creates an eduring life of love"
Very good!
Michael
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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So many wonderful descriptions of love that come from the heart.
You captured all the emotions well.
"When calls the heart, creates an eduring life of love"
Very good!
Michael
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Mike, thank you for your great review and comments. I'm glad you liked this my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Pantygynt
A lovely little piece of free verse straight from the heart. I am thinking you speak from experience here. This all works well, just one liottle word i think you probabnly meant to edit out.
"has nights making it (is) hard to sleep" The "is" sounds odd here.
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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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A lovely little piece of free verse straight from the heart. I am thinking you speak from experience here. This all works well, just one liottle word i think you probabnly meant to edit out.
"has nights making it (is) hard to sleep" The "is" sounds odd here.
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Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2017
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Thank you Jim for catching my oversight and thank you for your most excellent review and comments. I, unfortunately experienced this 12 years ago. She felt drugs were more important then what I was giving her, but it was and still is her loss.
enjoy this day whether it is day or evening where you are my friend,,,,,,,,,,jim
