Sonnets
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Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Fascinating artwork!- Very colorful.
This is a very good poem.- It has a rhyming pattern.
The title, 'Dreams to Not Remember'- It stands out.- Draws the reader in.
I especially like the lines: 'This damn-fool man saw light so bright it hurt.'
'I'm left with dreams I hope I don't remember.'
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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Fascinating artwork!- Very colorful.
This is a very good poem.- It has a rhyming pattern.
The title, 'Dreams to Not Remember'- It stands out.- Draws the reader in.
I especially like the lines: 'This damn-fool man saw light so bright it hurt.'
'I'm left with dreams I hope I don't remember.'
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
Comment from ceramic
An excellent poem of capturing the feelings of a women who 'loves' a man but the affection is not returned. The unfortunate result of misunderstanding common language, reading more into it than intended.
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An excellent poem of capturing the feelings of a women who 'loves' a man but the affection is not returned. The unfortunate result of misunderstanding common language, reading more into it than intended.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
