Rhythm of Life
A Naani2 total reviews
Comment from Mame
This is so different but apt. Starting with a small letter underlines the way life flows- brilliant. You have expressed a deeper concept in such a straightforward way in the manner of the 'great' bards. Not only that- your message reiterated the philosophy of 'going with the flow' and helped soothe my soul at this time as I have been forlorn with the loss of my dog. It is so easy to 'drown in fear' - thank you - must go 'with the flow. The picture apt and striking too. Well done!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is so different but apt. Starting with a small letter underlines the way life flows- brilliant. You have expressed a deeper concept in such a straightforward way in the manner of the 'great' bards. Not only that- your message reiterated the philosophy of 'going with the flow' and helped soothe my soul at this time as I have been forlorn with the loss of my dog. It is so easy to 'drown in fear' - thank you - must go 'with the flow. The picture apt and striking too. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. And I am sorry for the loss of your dog. Keep him or her in a warm place in your heart and rejoice in your memories of your time together.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your poem tells a compelling story and fits the format of the poetic form of the Naani. The artwork you chose is the perfect compliment to the piece. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Your poem tells a compelling story and fits the format of the poetic form of the Naani. The artwork you chose is the perfect compliment to the piece. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much !
