Donald Trump Is Humpty Dumpty
Nothing can put him together again.25 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Right, correct word can do miracle like it here; none (kings, parties and or Americans) can raise Trump for he had a great fall and nothing can help him out; nice thoughts, I liked and enjoyed the read.
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Right, correct word can do miracle like it here; none (kings, parties and or Americans) can raise Trump for he had a great fall and nothing can help him out; nice thoughts, I liked and enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem "Donald Trump is Humpty Dumpty" I also liked your choice of picture, it alone tells the story. Every one seems to get good mileage out of Donald.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem "Donald Trump is Humpty Dumpty" I also liked your choice of picture, it alone tells the story. Every one seems to get good mileage out of Donald.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I like this one a lot. I think it is very clever, tying in the wall and so on. Funny, I referred to trump the other as Humpty Trumpty and here we are. lol
good luck
GMG
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Hi there,
I like this one a lot. I think it is very clever, tying in the wall and so on. Funny, I referred to trump the other as Humpty Trumpty and here we are. lol
good luck
GMG
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from nuthead
Nicely done! Enjoying these 5-7-5 'ers on Trump.
The image you chose to accompany your poem is great.
"No promises doable" He made a lot of promises none of which he's followed thru on.
"Not even a wall". Perhaps if he builds it, and I don't believe he will, he'll sit on it and have great fall! ;o)
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Nicely done! Enjoying these 5-7-5 'ers on Trump.
The image you chose to accompany your poem is great.
"No promises doable" He made a lot of promises none of which he's followed thru on.
"Not even a wall". Perhaps if he builds it, and I don't believe he will, he'll sit on it and have great fall! ;o)
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Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from pome lover
wait and see
time will tell
I wish him well.
he works hard
tries his best
learning fast
it'd be nice
if all would
give him peace.
opinions differ
that is true
this is mine
pome lover
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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wait and see
time will tell
I wish him well.
he works hard
tries his best
learning fast
it'd be nice
if all would
give him peace.
opinions differ
that is true
this is mine
pome lover
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Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Yes, time will tell.
Of course, I disagree with your belief in his integrity.
If it only was a difference of political outlooks, I wouldn't be so hard on him.
His instincts are dangerous, especially given his thin skin, record of impulsive behavior, and the presidential power to act unilaterally.
There's too much at stake to sit back, and wait to see what he does.
Most folks have come to realize that, and anti-Trump demonstrations are going on all over the country.
I wish the trump problem was as uncomplicated as you see it.
Thanks for taking the time to think about it, Pome Lover!
Don
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Don,
thanks for not jumping on me.
thing is, I think Obama was a hundred times worse and it will take us ages to recuperate from the mess he left us in.
there were a lot of people who thought that but we didn't riot an demonstrate - we gave the man a chance.
