Comment from MLEaton

Excellent

What an amazing concept! Beautifully presented. Did the words or the image come first? I love the middle line and the amazing humour. Well done!
Thank you for sharing
Marion

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017

Thanks for the encouraging review. The picture came first, I just loved it. Cheers, j

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

haha this is so funny. The picture says it all along with your play on words--legumes, beet, dip, herbaceous. Well it may not be a play more of a clever way to use words associated with vegetables.

I enjoyed reading this poem. Good job & thanks for sharing.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thanks for the insightful review. I just loved the drawing, cheers, j

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

LOL! While just being silly - you have created a fun and playful poem with an excellent fun play on words.

Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017

Thanks for the review, Janet. I just loved that drawing. Cheers, j