trying times
a 1 6 1 poem4 total reviews
Comment from wilkswrites
needed to read this little piece. Although small, it is packed full of message. Thank you for sharing your gift. And best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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needed to read this little piece. Although small, it is packed full of message. Thank you for sharing your gift. And best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the warm review and sparkly stars. I always try to see hard times and "disasters' as a time to reassess. Sometimes it is a blessing in disguise but we are so busy seeing only the problem. Thanks for the encouragement and I hope you have a wonderful week end, cheers, j
Comment from His Grayness
Very clever, Indeed! Exceptional packaging and presentation to grab the reader's immediate interest. The delivery of the poetic style is perfect, albeit necessarily brief for this style of poetry. I cannot offer anything to improve this and thank the author for a wonderful example of this poetic style. HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Very clever, Indeed! Exceptional packaging and presentation to grab the reader's immediate interest. The delivery of the poetic style is perfect, albeit necessarily brief for this style of poetry. I cannot offer anything to improve this and thank the author for a wonderful example of this poetic style. HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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yes sire, thanks for the review.It was a fun write with such restriction. Cheers, j
Comment from dovemarie
I have never read a one-six-one poem. I think this was very good. I broke up the lines as I was reading it: Just trust. Just believe you can adjust. Believe you can adjust...trust. It really got me to thinking, even though it is a simple, short piece of writing. Dove
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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I have never read a one-six-one poem. I think this was very good. I broke up the lines as I was reading it: Just trust. Just believe you can adjust. Believe you can adjust...trust. It really got me to thinking, even though it is a simple, short piece of writing. Dove
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Thanks for the insightful review. It is hard to trust in ourselves when things are going bad, but we are stronger and more clever than we sometimes believe. Cheers,j
Comment from mvbrooks
What a very positive, proactive sentiment and an interesting picture of someone appearing to fly. I think more of us have to remember that--yes, we can adjust. We stated.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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What a very positive, proactive sentiment and an interesting picture of someone appearing to fly. I think more of us have to remember that--yes, we can adjust. We stated.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017
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Yup, gotta believe in ourselves and trust we are clever with our choices in hard times, cheers, j
