Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

LOL! If I concentrated really hard, I could hear my grandfather's voice. (Only he wouldn't have used such clean language.) This is a cute poem, and very colorful!
Thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

thanks. Patty.
Hope you know this was by no means a slur on anyone's language or pronunciations.
I'm glad you laughed.
PL

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

My kind of poet, you write as you feel, fee as you write and the little gem call for the speech to enhance the value, Hi Bro do what you hadda do.

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thanks, Ronnie. That's right. It wasn't meant to hurt any feelings. I get double teasing for my accent, A Georgian and Texan. But it's okay. I'm proud of both.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

I enjoyed this short and colourful poem, humour of getting the speeding tickets, a pink ticket sailed away fast like a jet, caprice wind did all, after the pink ticket blew up in an oak tree, I liked the flow of thoughts.

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

thank you once again, ALD! Wish I had thought of "caprice." Think I could have gotten away with cerise? :) or however you spell the color.
PL