The Gift of Life!' III.
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Comment from Thal1959
Ricky1024 - I believe this is the second time I have read a work of yours like this. I still don't get it. Is this a whole chapter? Why are you writing this way? I.e. one long continuous sentence with no punctuation. Since I am not aware of what you are doing, I am not going to saddle you with a bad rating. Please don't be offended, but if I can't figure this out, it would be best for me not to review any of your future works. I don't want to spoil things for you because I don't understand what's going on.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Ricky1024 - I believe this is the second time I have read a work of yours like this. I still don't get it. Is this a whole chapter? Why are you writing this way? I.e. one long continuous sentence with no punctuation. Since I am not aware of what you are doing, I am not going to saddle you with a bad rating. Please don't be offended, but if I can't figure this out, it would be best for me not to review any of your future works. I don't want to spoil things for you because I don't understand what's going on.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Sorry and thanks!
Ricky
1024.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Hitcher
A deep and emotionally charged write friend, missing me! Loss is a cruel mother and can tears one apart and scatter the pieces to the four winds then send you off to find them and watch you try and put the pieces back together.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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A deep and emotionally charged write friend, missing me! Loss is a cruel mother and can tears one apart and scatter the pieces to the four winds then send you off to find them and watch you try and put the pieces back together.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thanks Hitch Heart Book next.
It will go e you a Very Attack!
Ricky
1024.😭