Haiku (petal by petal)
haiku5 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I really like this. I wish I had a six left even though this poem is no longer active on the presentation page. I hadn't seen your name before. I liked the poem you do have active and thought I'd check out your work a little more. I am glad I did.
Excellent use of metaphor in this verse. Both the rose and the poet find satisfaction in the nourishing dew drops. Perfect syllable count. Thank you for sharing your talent.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I really like this. I wish I had a six left even though this poem is no longer active on the presentation page. I hadn't seen your name before. I liked the poem you do have active and thought I'd check out your work a little more. I am glad I did.
Excellent use of metaphor in this verse. Both the rose and the poet find satisfaction in the nourishing dew drops. Perfect syllable count. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Hello friend, very kind of you to visit and I am pleased that you stopped by; appreciate your time and the encouraging review, thank you very much.
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for slaking my thirst with your memorable 5-7-5 about the power of the rose. You also satisfied my desire for more alliteration! Best wishes in the contest and happy Saturday- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Thank you for slaking my thirst with your memorable 5-7-5 about the power of the rose. You also satisfied my desire for more alliteration! Best wishes in the contest and happy Saturday- Joan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Much obliged my friend, thank you very much for the wonderful review.
Comment from winnona
A well-written haiku for this contest. The words make the reader stop and think. Your well-chosen word flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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A well-written haiku for this contest. The words make the reader stop and think. Your well-chosen word flowed well and combined easily forming the message of the poem for the reader. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Hello winnona, I appreciate your visit and am pleased to read your wonderful comments; thank you very much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
petal by petal <>glazed dew satiates the Rose --
poet's thirst is slaked
you did a good job with the syllabic count and your connection between line one and two is smooth. Good job. :)
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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petal by petal <>glazed dew satiates the Rose --
poet's thirst is slaked
you did a good job with the syllabic count and your connection between line one and two is smooth. Good job. :)
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Hello there my friend, I appreciate your visit and glad you like the verse, thank you very much.
Comment from marybell1
What could be more beautiful than dew on a perfect rose. Your photo was just perfect and your syllable count was correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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What could be more beautiful than dew on a perfect rose. Your photo was just perfect and your syllable count was correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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marybell1, I thank you for your time and am pleased that you like the rose and the verse, thank you very much.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
