Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words and the use of the art work! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017

Thank you, Teri.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Thanks, but no thanks. I think this is a forest that I will just skirt. Even if it takes me a longer time to reach my destination, I will take that risk, rather than risk being eaten by something, anything. My time is important, but living is even more important. The poem is very good, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017

Thank you, nomi.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, this is a terrific poem. Yeah, a dense wood can at times be frightening with all its eerie shadows dancing around. Not to mention the sounds. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017

Thank you, Ulla.

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

There is always something vaguely spooky about dense woods, especially at nightfall. I enjoyed your poem and, in particular, the alliteration of: "dodge the wrath of wraith, or wolfen cursed"

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017

Thank you, Tony, for the terrific review. Bill

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was terrific. The first two lines especially stood out to me - and set the tone for the entire poem. Very creative and enjoyable.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2017

Thank you, Michael, for the great review. Bill