Comment from fimarie78

Excellent

Another touching piece. Your writing is so emotive. I love the way you acknowledge God as your father. I pray he continues to give you strength. And, to find where I are.. should this be am? but then it wouldn't rhyme with stars.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017

Thanks ever so much marie.
Ricky

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Your faith in Him is so evident in this poem. Waiting to be with Him again is a fervent prayer we share. I'm looking forward to going to my eternal home with Him, but while I'm here I need to share the good news. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017

Thank you for your kind review.
Ricky
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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your intimate poem-prayer to the Father. I find your style interesting as most of the quotes are only "open quotes" but without the corresponding "close quotes." It gives me a feeling of beginnings with end which would be an interesting take on eternity. I wondered if you didn't want "am" instead of "are" in "to find where I are... "

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017

Thanks
for your advice and kind thoughts.
Ricky
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